The Giver is part of the Science Fiction genre. A friend of mine has said that true science fiction is when the setting is the main character and not the story line.
So, based on that assumption, which of the following movies is science fiction and which is not: The Matrix and Star Wars -- why?
As you read The Giver, try to think about whether the characters are the focus or the setting and whether YOU think it is science fiction or not.
Wednesday, December 31, 2008
Tuesday, December 30, 2008
Book Cover
This is the most commonly used book cover for the novel, but here are two more I found:
I want you to tell me what the pictures show you about the novel and what you might think it would be about based on the images. DO NOT look up the summary of the novel and do not answer with a summary of the novel. Also, don't tell me which one you like the best. Just describe what is in the images and how that would make someone think about what would be in the novel. Predict: What MIGHT it be about?
Monday, December 29, 2008
Saturday, December 27, 2008
Week Off!
I gave myself a week off since this was my holiday week :)! Enjoy!
Hope you did all right on your exams! I will write a new Post this coming Monday and then it is back to weekly commenting!
tell me how your exams went.
I need more interview subjects!! Calling all interview subjects! Please let me know if you would like to be interviewed. A few more weeks until I return:).
Hope you did all right on your exams! I will write a new Post this coming Monday and then it is back to weekly commenting!
tell me how your exams went.
I need more interview subjects!! Calling all interview subjects! Please let me know if you would like to be interviewed. A few more weeks until I return:).
Friday, December 19, 2008
Student Focus
Tuba seems like a quiet girl to me, but I think that is just because it is English class. She seems like a girl who is outgoing and fun to be around, but I don't get to see it (unfortunately). I hope Tuba keeps bringing herself out as the year goes on because there is a lot of good stuff under that quiet exterior.
Introducing Tuba!
Full Name: Tuba Elmas
What does your name mean?: It's a kind of tree that has fruit.
Why did your parents name you this?: Honestly I really don't know but I remembered that my father's friend said my name when they were 18 and I think my father liked it and gave it to me.
Place of Birth: Istanbul
Why were you born here?: My mother and father were born and lived in Istanbul, and also they met there. That's why i was born in Istanbul.
What will you do for a living after university?: I'll probably move to the US.
Age: 16
What hobbies do you have?: I love shopping and also I've been playing piano for 12 years and playing volleyball since I was 11 years old, but I quit it now. And I like writing poems.
Where do you want to go to school: I hope it'll be Princeton.
Brothers or sisters?: I've a twin, he is Tahir and also I've got a little sister who is 3 years old.
Embarrassing moment: Last summer when I was in the summer school some teachers chose me as the master of ceremonies and I accepted it. However I was very nervous and forgot my words, like I couldn't say anything for about 10 minutes but then I realized that there was nothing to do and I just pulled a word out of my head. Oh it was terrible.
What is your favorite thing to eat?: I love pizza and sushi.
What are you doing and where are you at 8pm at night?: I was at my friend's party with my friends and we really are having so much fun.
World’s worst problem: Wars. We're in 20th century and there are still wars about really silly things but because of these "unnecessary" reasons lots of people died.
Who is your hero?: My hero is my imagination. It makes me feel alive and strong.
What will you be doing 10 years from now?: I think i'll be a successful woman that can control everything in my life.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: Whether I should be an IB student or non-IB student.
One word that describes you: Flawless :)
Introducing Tuba!
Full Name: Tuba Elmas
What does your name mean?: It's a kind of tree that has fruit.
Why did your parents name you this?: Honestly I really don't know but I remembered that my father's friend said my name when they were 18 and I think my father liked it and gave it to me.
Place of Birth: Istanbul
Why were you born here?: My mother and father were born and lived in Istanbul, and also they met there. That's why i was born in Istanbul.
What will you do for a living after university?: I'll probably move to the US.
Age: 16
What hobbies do you have?: I love shopping and also I've been playing piano for 12 years and playing volleyball since I was 11 years old, but I quit it now. And I like writing poems.
Where do you want to go to school: I hope it'll be Princeton.
Brothers or sisters?: I've a twin, he is Tahir and also I've got a little sister who is 3 years old.
Embarrassing moment: Last summer when I was in the summer school some teachers chose me as the master of ceremonies and I accepted it. However I was very nervous and forgot my words, like I couldn't say anything for about 10 minutes but then I realized that there was nothing to do and I just pulled a word out of my head. Oh it was terrible.
What is your favorite thing to eat?: I love pizza and sushi.
What are you doing and where are you at 8pm at night?: I was at my friend's party with my friends and we really are having so much fun.
World’s worst problem: Wars. We're in 20th century and there are still wars about really silly things but because of these "unnecessary" reasons lots of people died.
Who is your hero?: My hero is my imagination. It makes me feel alive and strong.
What will you be doing 10 years from now?: I think i'll be a successful woman that can control everything in my life.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: Whether I should be an IB student or non-IB student.
One word that describes you: Flawless :)
Thursday, December 18, 2008
Sound Technician
I know I few of you commented that you would want to be the actors or directors of films, but what about a Sound Technician? Here is the job description for someone who wants to edit the sound for a film.
THE JOB: Sound technicians operate technical equipment to amplify, enhance, record, mix or reproduce sound in support of performing arts, and may also assemble and maintain sound equipment.
Personal Requirements
* a good ear for detail in all areas of sound
* good at working with computers and audio equipment
* can work under pressure
Work Conditions
Sound technicians work in radio, television and recording studios, or in theaters and other live performance venues.
Sound technicians may be required to work shifts that involve long hours in the evenings and on weekends. They often work under difficult conditions and, with outdoor concerts, in unpredictable weather.
Duties and Tasks
A sound technician may perform the following tasks:
* determine sound requirements
* set up, test and operate equipment as well as place and adjust microphones
* monitor audio signals to detect quality differences or malfunctions
* maintain and repair amplifiers, tuners, receivers, digital audio systems
* build and install sound systems
* dub and edit tapes
* operate controls to maintain correct sound levels
* talk with actors and instruct them on microphone use
* introduce pre-recorded special effects required by scripts
Who thinks they would be good at being a SOUND TECHNICIAN?
THE JOB: Sound technicians operate technical equipment to amplify, enhance, record, mix or reproduce sound in support of performing arts, and may also assemble and maintain sound equipment.
Personal Requirements
* a good ear for detail in all areas of sound
* good at working with computers and audio equipment
* can work under pressure
Work Conditions
Sound technicians work in radio, television and recording studios, or in theaters and other live performance venues.
Sound technicians may be required to work shifts that involve long hours in the evenings and on weekends. They often work under difficult conditions and, with outdoor concerts, in unpredictable weather.
Duties and Tasks
A sound technician may perform the following tasks:
* determine sound requirements
* set up, test and operate equipment as well as place and adjust microphones
* monitor audio signals to detect quality differences or malfunctions
* maintain and repair amplifiers, tuners, receivers, digital audio systems
* build and install sound systems
* dub and edit tapes
* operate controls to maintain correct sound levels
* talk with actors and instruct them on microphone use
* introduce pre-recorded special effects required by scripts
Who thinks they would be good at being a SOUND TECHNICIAN?
Wednesday, December 17, 2008
Tuesday, December 16, 2008
Diegetic? What?
There are two types of sound in film:
Diegetic (actual sounds that are heard within the story -- e.g. characters talking and birds singing) and Non-diegetic(sounds that are heard by the audience and have no onscreen source)
SBM has a number of Non-diegetic sounds that are also sometimes diegetic. Some of the songs are actually heard by the characters and are playing on the radio or on a record in the scene, but other times the songs pop up and have no real source in the particular scene they are being played in.
Give me an example or either a diegetic or non-diegetic sound from ANY of the scenes you have seen so far.
Diegetic (actual sounds that are heard within the story -- e.g. characters talking and birds singing) and Non-diegetic(sounds that are heard by the audience and have no onscreen source)
SBM has a number of Non-diegetic sounds that are also sometimes diegetic. Some of the songs are actually heard by the characters and are playing on the radio or on a record in the scene, but other times the songs pop up and have no real source in the particular scene they are being played in.
Give me an example or either a diegetic or non-diegetic sound from ANY of the scenes you have seen so far.
Monday, December 15, 2008
History of Sound
Just so that you know where sound in film came from (and that it wasn't always there) I thought you should go to this web site to read a little bit about when and how sound came into the movie theater.
If there were no sound in film, what would the viewer have to rely on instead?
If there were no sound in film, what would the viewer have to rely on instead?
Sunday, December 14, 2008
Saturday, December 6, 2008
Pan Shot
Panning has nothing to do with cooking (ha ha!). A Pan Shot is when the camera is stationary (in one, fixed place) and it turns from either right to left or left to right and sort of scans or pans the horizon.
Usually the camera is following a moving object and that object is kept in the middle of the frame.
Many times this shot is used when the director wants to follow the action. When you see a pan shot, imagine the camera did NOT follow the action and instead the action moved passed the camera and out of the frame. How would it change the feeling or mood of the scene? It is very insteresting to consider.
Usually the camera is following a moving object and that object is kept in the middle of the frame.
Many times this shot is used when the director wants to follow the action. When you see a pan shot, imagine the camera did NOT follow the action and instead the action moved passed the camera and out of the frame. How would it change the feeling or mood of the scene? It is very insteresting to consider.
Friday, December 5, 2008
Student Focus
Debora has what we call "an easy smile." She is able to smile about any situation, but not in a way that overpowers anyone else's ability to smile. It is just there on her face even when it isn't.
Debora is very laid back, but knows when to kick it in gear if the heat is on. She is a sweet girl who has a good understanding of the world around her and knows that time will pass no matter what happens, so she takes everything that happens in an easy way.
Here is Debora! The queen of serene!
What does your name mean?:I actually never knew the meaning of my name. I asked to my parents but they don't know it either.
Why did your parents name you this?: They wanted my name to start with the letter D because my grandmother's(mother's mother) name starts with D. My sister's name starts with J and my other grandmother's name starts with J also. Even though they don't know the meaning of Debora, they said that they gave me that name because they liked how it sounds.
Place of Birth: İstanbul-Avrupa Hastanesi
Why were you born here?: The doctor who gave the birth of my sister at Amerikan Hastanesi, transferred to Avrupa Hastanesi. My mother was pleased with his job the last time, so he wanted him to give my birth too.
What will you do for a living after university?: I haven't decided yet. I have a couple of ideas in my mind. Music and concerts are things that I enjoy the most in life so, I might work in a concert organization company and then have my own company. I also might work in my father's job. He has a textile company and sells shirts to brands all around the world, so he goes to meetings in different countries. I'm good at changing people's minds and make them buy the product so I think I might do that job too.
Age:15
What hobbies do you have?: Listening to music and discovering new artists, snowboarding, wake boarding, going to gym, running by the sea. I also used to play tennis a lot but I stopped playing after I hurt my knee.
Where do you want to go to school: I want to go to NYU because I like big cities and also it's a good university. If I don't get accepted to a good school in New York, I'll study at London because I also think that it's a good place to go to university. If non of these happen I would prefer staying at Istanbul because it's one of my favorite places in the world.
Brothers or sisters?: I have one sister. Her name is Jennifer. She graduated from Koç School 2 years ago. Now, she's a student at Parsons School of Design, in New York. I visited her last holiday but I still miss her a lot because without her the house is very quiet.
Embarrassing moment: Two or three weeks ago our car stopped by the petrol station near our school. I was in a hurry and also hungry so I ran to the market to buy something to eat. When I was about to enter the market I slipped and fell on my butt. I fell so badly that I could remember the moment which I was in the air. Because, the floor was wet my skirt became wet too. My butt hurt so much that I couldn't sleep on it for a week.
What are you doing and where are you at 8pm at night?: I am walking on my way home from my pilates lesson. Sometimes I might be sitting in my room waiting for my mother to come home. At 8pm I might also be eating dinner with my parents, at home.
Favorite movie: I have a couple of favourite movies - Crush, Troy and The Kite Runner are the ones which are in my mind right now.
World’s worst problem: Poverty, Education and Global Warming.
Who is your hero?: Mustafa Kemal Atatürk, of course. Without him we wouldn't have a modern life and there wouldn't be Turkey. He fought for us and saved our land.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: It's being a FM or TM. Even though I have time to decide, it's really important for my grades next year. I have to decide weather Science or Turkish is better for me. I have to discover which one I like the most.
One word that describes you: ''MOODY.'' I can't control it.
Debora is very laid back, but knows when to kick it in gear if the heat is on. She is a sweet girl who has a good understanding of the world around her and knows that time will pass no matter what happens, so she takes everything that happens in an easy way.
Here is Debora! The queen of serene!
What does your name mean?:I actually never knew the meaning of my name. I asked to my parents but they don't know it either.
Why did your parents name you this?: They wanted my name to start with the letter D because my grandmother's(mother's mother) name starts with D. My sister's name starts with J and my other grandmother's name starts with J also. Even though they don't know the meaning of Debora, they said that they gave me that name because they liked how it sounds.
Place of Birth: İstanbul-Avrupa Hastanesi
Why were you born here?: The doctor who gave the birth of my sister at Amerikan Hastanesi, transferred to Avrupa Hastanesi. My mother was pleased with his job the last time, so he wanted him to give my birth too.
What will you do for a living after university?: I haven't decided yet. I have a couple of ideas in my mind. Music and concerts are things that I enjoy the most in life so, I might work in a concert organization company and then have my own company. I also might work in my father's job. He has a textile company and sells shirts to brands all around the world, so he goes to meetings in different countries. I'm good at changing people's minds and make them buy the product so I think I might do that job too.
Age:15
What hobbies do you have?: Listening to music and discovering new artists, snowboarding, wake boarding, going to gym, running by the sea. I also used to play tennis a lot but I stopped playing after I hurt my knee.
Where do you want to go to school: I want to go to NYU because I like big cities and also it's a good university. If I don't get accepted to a good school in New York, I'll study at London because I also think that it's a good place to go to university. If non of these happen I would prefer staying at Istanbul because it's one of my favorite places in the world.
Brothers or sisters?: I have one sister. Her name is Jennifer. She graduated from Koç School 2 years ago. Now, she's a student at Parsons School of Design, in New York. I visited her last holiday but I still miss her a lot because without her the house is very quiet.
Embarrassing moment: Two or three weeks ago our car stopped by the petrol station near our school. I was in a hurry and also hungry so I ran to the market to buy something to eat. When I was about to enter the market I slipped and fell on my butt. I fell so badly that I could remember the moment which I was in the air. Because, the floor was wet my skirt became wet too. My butt hurt so much that I couldn't sleep on it for a week.
What are you doing and where are you at 8pm at night?: I am walking on my way home from my pilates lesson. Sometimes I might be sitting in my room waiting for my mother to come home. At 8pm I might also be eating dinner with my parents, at home.
Favorite movie: I have a couple of favourite movies - Crush, Troy and The Kite Runner are the ones which are in my mind right now.
World’s worst problem: Poverty, Education and Global Warming.
Who is your hero?: Mustafa Kemal Atatürk, of course. Without him we wouldn't have a modern life and there wouldn't be Turkey. He fought for us and saved our land.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: It's being a FM or TM. Even though I have time to decide, it's really important for my grades next year. I have to decide weather Science or Turkish is better for me. I have to discover which one I like the most.
One word that describes you: ''MOODY.'' I can't control it.
Wednesday, December 3, 2008
Bird's Eye Shot
What would it look like if you were a bird? That is how a bird's eye shot works. The camera is pretending it is a "bird" peering down on the scene.
Tell me if there is a scene in SBM that is shot this way. Where is it in the film?
Tell me if there is a scene in SBM that is shot this way. Where is it in the film?
Tuesday, December 2, 2008
Close Up
"Get ready for your CLOSE UP!"
Getting ready for a close up is a common phrase that sometimes comes up in American culture and it relates to movie making. A close-up is to show the details of a scene or a severe reaction to something where the actor's reaction is necessary for the scene to move along.
This is where the acting and make-up have to be good. If either are off, a smart audience will know it. Pay attention to when close-ups are used in SBM and what they are used for.
Click here for more of an explanation of "Close Up."
Getting ready for a close up is a common phrase that sometimes comes up in American culture and it relates to movie making. A close-up is to show the details of a scene or a severe reaction to something where the actor's reaction is necessary for the scene to move along.
This is where the acting and make-up have to be good. If either are off, a smart audience will know it. Pay attention to when close-ups are used in SBM and what they are used for.
Click here for more of an explanation of "Close Up."
Monday, December 1, 2008
Tracking Shot
These are the most fun to me. I love imagining a guy with a camera on a track, following the characters as they are acting out a portion of the scene. It is like having someone follow you around with a camera.
I always try to pay attention to a film and notice the tracking shots, so I can laugh to myself about how the actors are being "followed" or tracked in the scene.
Click here for more of a description.
I always try to pay attention to a film and notice the tracking shots, so I can laugh to myself about how the actors are being "followed" or tracked in the scene.
Click here for more of a description.
Sunday, November 30, 2008
Establishing Shot
Pay attention during certain parts of the film when you are shown something on the screen just to orient the viewer. An establishing shot sets up where the scene is taking place or where the characters are in a scene before it happens. It is sort of like how at the beginning of a novel, the author will describe the scene first before adding the characters (a very common storytelling technique).
For a film, it is more about letting the viewer know where the characters are in the scene before it happens.
Click here to find out more.
For a film, it is more about letting the viewer know where the characters are in the scene before it happens.
Click here to find out more.
Friday, November 28, 2008
Student Focus
Benan is sometimes a quiet girl, but sometimes she is also very socially active. Her personlity depends a lot on how she is feeling on a certain day (or maybe how much sleep she got). Benan is a sweet girl who seems to be the kind of friend who would help no matter what the situation may be. She will support her friends no matter what it takes.
Introducing Benan!
Full Name: Benan Terzioğlu
What does your name mean?: It means when a person points to a really beautiful person.
Why did your parents name you this?: Because my mom likes it. She said that she heard this name when she was 18 and thought that it was unusual and original, not ordinary.
Place of Birth: Istanbul / American Hospital
Why were you born here?: Because my mom's doctor was working there. My mom is from Switzerland and my dad is from Istanbul. My mom moved here and met with my dad and they started to live together here.
What will you do for a living after university?:I will live in the US a bit and then I will return to Turkey to become a successful interior designer or an architect.
Age: 16 yrs old
What hobbies do you have?: Windsurfing, dancing and painting. They make me feel free.
Where do you want to go to school: Parsons or Rhode Island School of Design because they both are excellent design schools.
Brothers or sisters?:I have a sister. She is 11 years old. Her name is Elvan and she goes to Üskudar American Academy. She is really pretty.
Embarrassing moment: It's a hard question to answer. I guess something private.
What are you doing and where are you at 8pm at night?:Last night I was going to my friend Cem's house.
Favorite movie: Atonement, 21, ıssız adam(a Turkish movie)
World’s worst problem: World's economic crisis and global warming I guess.
Who is your hero?: My hero is myself.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: Whether to be a Turkish Math or Science Math student, or if I should be in IB or be a non IB student.
One word that describes you: Uncontrollable.
Introducing Benan!
Full Name: Benan Terzioğlu
What does your name mean?: It means when a person points to a really beautiful person.
Why did your parents name you this?: Because my mom likes it. She said that she heard this name when she was 18 and thought that it was unusual and original, not ordinary.
Place of Birth: Istanbul / American Hospital
Why were you born here?: Because my mom's doctor was working there. My mom is from Switzerland and my dad is from Istanbul. My mom moved here and met with my dad and they started to live together here.
What will you do for a living after university?:I will live in the US a bit and then I will return to Turkey to become a successful interior designer or an architect.
Age: 16 yrs old
What hobbies do you have?: Windsurfing, dancing and painting. They make me feel free.
Where do you want to go to school: Parsons or Rhode Island School of Design because they both are excellent design schools.
Brothers or sisters?:I have a sister. She is 11 years old. Her name is Elvan and she goes to Üskudar American Academy. She is really pretty.
Embarrassing moment: It's a hard question to answer. I guess something private.
What are you doing and where are you at 8pm at night?:Last night I was going to my friend Cem's house.
Favorite movie: Atonement, 21, ıssız adam(a Turkish movie)
World’s worst problem: World's economic crisis and global warming I guess.
Who is your hero?: My hero is myself.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: Whether to be a Turkish Math or Science Math student, or if I should be in IB or be a non IB student.
One word that describes you: Uncontrollable.
Thursday, November 27, 2008
Editing
Look at all these different editing techniques (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cinematic_techniques):
Editing and transitional devices
Main article: Film editing
* A Roll
* B Roll
* Cross cutting
* Cutaway
* Dissolve
* Establishing shot
* Fast cutting
* Flashback
* Insert
* Jump cut
* Keying
* L cut ("Split edit")
* Master shot
* Match cut
* Point of view shot
* Screen direction
* Sequence shot
* Slow cutting
* Split screen
* SMPTE time code
* Shot reverse shot
* Talking head
* Wipe
o Clock wipe
o Heart wipe
o Matrix wipe
o Star wipe
Editing and transitional devices
Main article: Film editing
* A Roll
* B Roll
* Cross cutting
* Cutaway
* Dissolve
* Establishing shot
* Fast cutting
* Flashback
* Insert
* Jump cut
* Keying
* L cut ("Split edit")
* Master shot
* Match cut
* Point of view shot
* Screen direction
* Sequence shot
* Slow cutting
* Split screen
* SMPTE time code
* Shot reverse shot
* Talking head
* Wipe
o Clock wipe
o Heart wipe
o Matrix wipe
o Star wipe
Wednesday, November 26, 2008
Tuesday, November 25, 2008
Sound
The songs in SBM are amazing. You will fall in love with them before even falling in love with the film. When thinking about sound in film, a viewer should take into consideration where and when the song is being used. How does the song change or compliment the mood of the scene and is the song used to change scenes?
When watching the film, pay attention to the songs sound (not necessarily the lyrics) and how that sound draws out certain emotions. What kinds of instruments are used and do those instruments reflect a certain feeling? Is there a certain rhythm to the music and does that reflect a certain tone or mood? Does the voice of the singer sound a certain way that changes the mood of the song? How?
These are only a few things to consider, but make sure you put on your analytical thinking cap when you are viewing the film and pay close attention to every angle.
When watching the film, pay attention to the songs sound (not necessarily the lyrics) and how that sound draws out certain emotions. What kinds of instruments are used and do those instruments reflect a certain feeling? Is there a certain rhythm to the music and does that reflect a certain tone or mood? Does the voice of the singer sound a certain way that changes the mood of the song? How?
These are only a few things to consider, but make sure you put on your analytical thinking cap when you are viewing the film and pay close attention to every angle.
Monday, November 24, 2008
Narrative and Film
Just like a good story, a film is telling someone's or something's story from a certain perspective with characters in a setting. There is usually some sort of rising action and falling action and some sort of conclusion all making up the plot. There is character development as well as changes in setting.
Only, in a film, the creators are using images instead of words. So, think about how the film develops the story the same way a novel or short story might develop, but think about how the viewer uses the context of the image to understand tone and mood instead of words, like in a novel.
Only, in a film, the creators are using images instead of words. So, think about how the film develops the story the same way a novel or short story might develop, but think about how the viewer uses the context of the image to understand tone and mood instead of words, like in a novel.
Sunday, November 23, 2008
Film Making
The best way to understand a film in its completion is to understand how it was made.Wikipedia is always a great source for quick information so go to this site: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Filmmaking and read up on some of the basics!
If you were working on a film, what part of the process would you most likely be a part of? Would you be an actor in it? Would you do the set design? Would you create the storyboard? The screenplay? The costumes? The make-up and hair? Getting investors for the film? Casting? The director? Lighting?
Keep in mind all of the techniques I bring up on the blog while you watch the film. There are many things Ms. Sevimli will teach you about film also and keep those in mind as you view the film as well. Think about how they are used and where they are used and why they are used at certain moments in the film.
Most of all -- enjoy watching a great movie the first time through and then get into analyzing it the second time through!
If you were working on a film, what part of the process would you most likely be a part of? Would you be an actor in it? Would you do the set design? Would you create the storyboard? The screenplay? The costumes? The make-up and hair? Getting investors for the film? Casting? The director? Lighting?
Keep in mind all of the techniques I bring up on the blog while you watch the film. There are many things Ms. Sevimli will teach you about film also and keep those in mind as you view the film as well. Think about how they are used and where they are used and why they are used at certain moments in the film.
Most of all -- enjoy watching a great movie the first time through and then get into analyzing it the second time through!
Friday, November 21, 2008
Student Focus
From the moment I set eyes on Buğce I knew I was going to have someone who would challenge the things I said and be inquisitive and curious. I always love this type of student as long as they also listen to what I respond with and eventually understand what it is I am trying to do for them as a teacher. Buğce sees this and knows that I want to help everyone in the class succeed while also challenging them to do better.
She is a girl who definitely is not embarrassed by much (which is what she says in the interview) and someone who would be fun to hang out with because of her laid back attitude. Here is where you can get to know her more. Introducing Buğce!
Full Name: Buğce Güler
What does your name mean?: The first snow flake that falls to the ground.
Why did your parents name you this?: I have no idea. Maybe to be different than other names.
Place of Birth: In İstanbul at Bakırkoy – The International Hospital
Why were you born here?: My mom was born in Izmir after she was twelve she came to İstanbul with her family. I don’t know why, but we still go to Izmir. There are not many people with whom we speak from the family, but we go there to go to Çeşme and my mom opened a new boutique in Izmir. My dad has always lived in İstanbul. He has done the same job for 26 yrs. Before he was working with his father at his father’s factory and then he opened his own factory. After he married my mom, my mom also wanted to work, though my dad said “you don’t need to” But she started to work as a finance officer. Then she became the top designer of our company and now she has a brand name B and G for four years and that’s all. I think that she is very good.
Is that what you will do?: Yes. I also want to be a designer and be educated at Parsons which is in the US. So, I hope to be an IB student.
Age: 14 yrs
What hobbies do you have?: Now I am on the basketball team of our school. I used to be on the volleyball team for 4 yrs on the school team and I used to do Motocross, but now I am not doing it because I fell down while I was training for a competition. The ambulance took me to the hospital, but I don’t think it was very serious. My eyes went white and I couldn’t breathe. I also play tennis now.
Where do you want to go to school: FIT maybe...besides Parsons.
Brothers or sisters?: Yes. I have a brother. He is 8 and he is in the Acı School near Akmerkez.
Embarrassing moment: I guess I don’t have one. I do, but I know what I am doing, so I don’t get embarrassed of the things I am doing usually.
Favorite movie: There are lots of movies that I like, but the movie The Notebook was pretty nice. It was a classic love story actually, but I still liked it. Usually romance makes me cry.
World’s worst problem: I need to think about it because it is a very serious question and I don’t want to give a regular answer for this.
Who is your hero?: My dad used to be my hero, but I don’t know why now. I don’t believe that he is strong enough. I don’t know. I can’t answer this question.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: I need to think about whether to choose Science/Math or Turkish classes.
One word that describes you: What do you think it is? (You have to answer that...) "Shopaholic" and "Talkative" maybe.
She is a girl who definitely is not embarrassed by much (which is what she says in the interview) and someone who would be fun to hang out with because of her laid back attitude. Here is where you can get to know her more. Introducing Buğce!
Full Name: Buğce Güler
What does your name mean?: The first snow flake that falls to the ground.
Why did your parents name you this?: I have no idea. Maybe to be different than other names.
Place of Birth: In İstanbul at Bakırkoy – The International Hospital
Why were you born here?: My mom was born in Izmir after she was twelve she came to İstanbul with her family. I don’t know why, but we still go to Izmir. There are not many people with whom we speak from the family, but we go there to go to Çeşme and my mom opened a new boutique in Izmir. My dad has always lived in İstanbul. He has done the same job for 26 yrs. Before he was working with his father at his father’s factory and then he opened his own factory. After he married my mom, my mom also wanted to work, though my dad said “you don’t need to” But she started to work as a finance officer. Then she became the top designer of our company and now she has a brand name B and G for four years and that’s all. I think that she is very good.
Is that what you will do?: Yes. I also want to be a designer and be educated at Parsons which is in the US. So, I hope to be an IB student.
Age: 14 yrs
What hobbies do you have?: Now I am on the basketball team of our school. I used to be on the volleyball team for 4 yrs on the school team and I used to do Motocross, but now I am not doing it because I fell down while I was training for a competition. The ambulance took me to the hospital, but I don’t think it was very serious. My eyes went white and I couldn’t breathe. I also play tennis now.
Where do you want to go to school: FIT maybe...besides Parsons.
Brothers or sisters?: Yes. I have a brother. He is 8 and he is in the Acı School near Akmerkez.
Embarrassing moment: I guess I don’t have one. I do, but I know what I am doing, so I don’t get embarrassed of the things I am doing usually.
Favorite movie: There are lots of movies that I like, but the movie The Notebook was pretty nice. It was a classic love story actually, but I still liked it. Usually romance makes me cry.
World’s worst problem: I need to think about it because it is a very serious question and I don’t want to give a regular answer for this.
Who is your hero?: My dad used to be my hero, but I don’t know why now. I don’t believe that he is strong enough. I don’t know. I can’t answer this question.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: I need to think about whether to choose Science/Math or Turkish classes.
One word that describes you: What do you think it is? (You have to answer that...) "Shopaholic" and "Talkative" maybe.
Thursday, November 20, 2008
Lighting
How does lighting affect the mood of a scene? What kind of lighting could produce something scary? What kind of lighting produces something more serious? etc...
(THINK color and brightness and angles and shadows)
(THINK color and brightness and angles and shadows)
Wednesday, November 19, 2008
Cinema vs. Movies
How are some movies art while others are just something that was made to be sold? How can people tell the difference between a well made movie and one that was just made for money?
Tuesday, November 18, 2008
IMDB
If you guys do not know this site already, you must go to it: imdb.com
It is a movie database with all sorts of facts and information about movies and actors and television shows -- everything people love being entertained by.
Check out this page about Stand By Me.
Remember -- a "spoiler" means that you will find out information that may ruin the movie for you, so don't read on if you want to enjoy the film as you watch it.
It is a movie database with all sorts of facts and information about movies and actors and television shows -- everything people love being entertained by.
Check out this page about Stand By Me.
Remember -- a "spoiler" means that you will find out information that may ruin the movie for you, so don't read on if you want to enjoy the film as you watch it.
Sunday, November 16, 2008
Stand By Me
What could this title mean? What do you think the movie is about based on the title? (Don't respond to this question if you already saw the movie or if you have looked it up online)
Saturday, November 15, 2008
Interview Subjects!
Calling all interview subjects! If you want to be interviewed via email, just comment to this post letting me know you will check your email for the interview questions within the next few days.
Whoever responds, I will send a list of questions that I would like you to answer. I will also probably send a follow up email with additional questions because I always have some other things I want to ask after I learn a bit more about you.
Hope to be in contact soon! Remember - I have all of your email addresses, but if you think you gave me an address that you do not check -- feel free to email me with a new email address.
Thanks!
Whoever responds, I will send a list of questions that I would like you to answer. I will also probably send a follow up email with additional questions because I always have some other things I want to ask after I learn a bit more about you.
Hope to be in contact soon! Remember - I have all of your email addresses, but if you think you gave me an address that you do not check -- feel free to email me with a new email address.
Thanks!
Friday, November 14, 2008
Student Focus
Ecem is a great girl who views life as something that is quite easy to live. With a lot of support and some time, she knows that anything she wants to do will be quite simple.
Introducing the very focused yet very laid back Ecem!
Full Name: Ecem Şenyuva
What does your name mean?: My queen –Ece means queen – so Ecem means my queen.
Why did your parents name you this?: My mom decided to name her first daughter Nazlı, but I didn’t have a name for 2 weeks. I don't know why.
Place of Birth: İstanbul – Cerrahpasa Tip Fakultesi
Why were you born here?: My mom used to work there, so the doctors were her friends, so it was good she knew the doctors.
Age: 15 yrs
Have you always lived in Istanbul: Yes, but I have moved like 8 times because of school and my mom’s and dad’s job. My mom is a general surgeon and my dad is a plastic surgeon professor. He goes to the University twice a week.
What hobbies do you have?: I have played basketball since third grade. I played piano. I have done SCUBA and windsurfing.
Where do you want to go to school: I came to Koç because I want to go to University in the US. My sister goes to Princeton. She is studying biomedical engineering.
What do you want to study?: I don’t know, but if I try to be a doctor it will be so easy. Sometimes I still want to be a star in Hollywood. (laughs) That is kind of like every girl’s dream.
Brothers or sisters?: I have one sister and she is 18yrs old. No brothers. Only her. I am alone right now. She is my best friend in the whole world and the greatest person I ever met. She will come back home in December and then I will go visit her in February.
Embarrassing moment: We used to go to extra courses for HS after school to prepared for HS. It was the graduation party of that course and before we were given the certificates, they were announcing our names they would have a sort of an introduction. So for mine, the teacher said nice things and I thought it was me and went to the stage and then it turned out that it was someone else and I was standing on the stage.
Favorite movie: I have four actually: Children of Men, The Devil Wears Prada, Atonement and Gladiator.
World’s worst problem: War, Global Warming, and Education
Something people would be surprised to know about you: When I am in places that I am not familiar with I am so shy, but when I get used it I am the real Ecem. It has taken a month and a half here I guess. It depends on the students and the teachers of course.
Who is your hero?: Our leader Ataturk and my mom. I know everything about Ataturk, like how he saved us, and still we feel how he affected us and we try to protect him. My mom because she taught me everything I learned and “Made me who I am today.”
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: Being in the IB program and going to University.
One word that describes you: I love sharing. Maybe “outgoing.”
Introducing the very focused yet very laid back Ecem!
Full Name: Ecem Şenyuva
What does your name mean?: My queen –Ece means queen – so Ecem means my queen.
Why did your parents name you this?: My mom decided to name her first daughter Nazlı, but I didn’t have a name for 2 weeks. I don't know why.
Place of Birth: İstanbul – Cerrahpasa Tip Fakultesi
Why were you born here?: My mom used to work there, so the doctors were her friends, so it was good she knew the doctors.
Age: 15 yrs
Have you always lived in Istanbul: Yes, but I have moved like 8 times because of school and my mom’s and dad’s job. My mom is a general surgeon and my dad is a plastic surgeon professor. He goes to the University twice a week.
What hobbies do you have?: I have played basketball since third grade. I played piano. I have done SCUBA and windsurfing.
Where do you want to go to school: I came to Koç because I want to go to University in the US. My sister goes to Princeton. She is studying biomedical engineering.
What do you want to study?: I don’t know, but if I try to be a doctor it will be so easy. Sometimes I still want to be a star in Hollywood. (laughs) That is kind of like every girl’s dream.
Brothers or sisters?: I have one sister and she is 18yrs old. No brothers. Only her. I am alone right now. She is my best friend in the whole world and the greatest person I ever met. She will come back home in December and then I will go visit her in February.
Embarrassing moment: We used to go to extra courses for HS after school to prepared for HS. It was the graduation party of that course and before we were given the certificates, they were announcing our names they would have a sort of an introduction. So for mine, the teacher said nice things and I thought it was me and went to the stage and then it turned out that it was someone else and I was standing on the stage.
Favorite movie: I have four actually: Children of Men, The Devil Wears Prada, Atonement and Gladiator.
World’s worst problem: War, Global Warming, and Education
Something people would be surprised to know about you: When I am in places that I am not familiar with I am so shy, but when I get used it I am the real Ecem. It has taken a month and a half here I guess. It depends on the students and the teachers of course.
Who is your hero?: Our leader Ataturk and my mom. I know everything about Ataturk, like how he saved us, and still we feel how he affected us and we try to protect him. My mom because she taught me everything I learned and “Made me who I am today.”
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: Being in the IB program and going to University.
One word that describes you: I love sharing. Maybe “outgoing.”
Thursday, November 13, 2008
Exam - Week 2
This bit of info gives just a little insight into how to structure your article and what details it should contain. This information was on this great web site.
The role of a reporter is to find out what people are thinking of an issue and to report the opinions of different stakeholders of an issue. These comments make up most of the story. The narrative helps to weave the comments into a coherent whole. Hint: Stick to one particular theme throughout the story. You can put in different details but they all have to relate to the original idea of the piece. (e.g. If your story is about black youth and their relationship with the police you DO NOT want to go into details about the life of any one particular youth).
As a reporter, you are the eyes and ears for the readers. You should try to get a feel for the story. Having a feel means getting some understanding of the emotional background of the piece and the people involved in it. Try to get a sense of the characters involved and why they feel the way they do.
The role of a reporter is to find out what people are thinking of an issue and to report the opinions of different stakeholders of an issue. These comments make up most of the story. The narrative helps to weave the comments into a coherent whole. Hint: Stick to one particular theme throughout the story. You can put in different details but they all have to relate to the original idea of the piece. (e.g. If your story is about black youth and their relationship with the police you DO NOT want to go into details about the life of any one particular youth).
As a reporter, you are the eyes and ears for the readers. You should try to get a feel for the story. Having a feel means getting some understanding of the emotional background of the piece and the people involved in it. Try to get a sense of the characters involved and why they feel the way they do.
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Exam - Week 2
What have you learned in the past week about writing a newspaper article? How has a writing process helped? How would this have been if it was just a sit down exam? Would you have learned more or less?
Tuesday, November 11, 2008
Exam - Week 2
Remember we talked about quotes a little bit? Here is some additional advice about using quotes from this great web site.
Using Quotes
The best quotes are short and bright. They surprise, shock or amuse. They reveal insights or secrets. They prove points. They allow experts to give perspective, and real people to air grievances. Don't quote simple statements of fact.
Problems to avoid when quoting people -
* Stutter quotes: Saying the same thing twice.
Mayor Bessie Chronopoulous said Tuesday she will seek a second term.
I intend to run for a second term," Chronopoulous said.
* Partial quotes: Often, it's less awkward just to paraphrase.
Weak: Smith said the money was "spent by me" in order to buy "better-looking plants for the office."
Better: Smith said he spent the money on better-looking plants for the office.
* Parenthetical info in quotes
Weak: "We can't get (the concrete barrier) to stay in one place because (La Tourette) keeps driving into it," Smith said.
Better: La Tourette's driving habits appear to be the main obstacle to keeping the concrete barrier from being moved.
"We can't get it to stay in one place because he keeps driving into it," Smith said.
* Junk quotes. Vague quotes. Quotes that say nothing.
* Stacking quotes. Just stringing a bunch of them together rather than constructing a story. You need to add your reporting.
* Weak lead quotes. Empty, boring, vague, repetitive.
* Weak end quotes. Using any old quote just to finish off the story. (Remember - I warned you against this.)
Using Quotes
The best quotes are short and bright. They surprise, shock or amuse. They reveal insights or secrets. They prove points. They allow experts to give perspective, and real people to air grievances. Don't quote simple statements of fact.
Problems to avoid when quoting people -
* Stutter quotes: Saying the same thing twice.
Mayor Bessie Chronopoulous said Tuesday she will seek a second term.
I intend to run for a second term," Chronopoulous said.
* Partial quotes: Often, it's less awkward just to paraphrase.
Weak: Smith said the money was "spent by me" in order to buy "better-looking plants for the office."
Better: Smith said he spent the money on better-looking plants for the office.
* Parenthetical info in quotes
Weak: "We can't get (the concrete barrier) to stay in one place because (La Tourette) keeps driving into it," Smith said.
Better: La Tourette's driving habits appear to be the main obstacle to keeping the concrete barrier from being moved.
"We can't get it to stay in one place because he keeps driving into it," Smith said.
* Junk quotes. Vague quotes. Quotes that say nothing.
* Stacking quotes. Just stringing a bunch of them together rather than constructing a story. You need to add your reporting.
* Weak lead quotes. Empty, boring, vague, repetitive.
* Weak end quotes. Using any old quote just to finish off the story. (Remember - I warned you against this.)
Monday, November 10, 2008
Peer Editing
How has Peer Editing been? Ar you learning something or is it slowing down your writing?
What has been the best part of the writing process?
What has been the best part of the writing process?
Sunday, November 9, 2008
Breakfast
What do you eat for breakfast in the morning to help you think better? I eat oatmeal with a little bit of Esmer Seker. It fills my belly and helps wake me up a bit.
Reminder: You still have Independent Reading and Masterclass, so be sure to bring in your books when you need them!
Reminder: You still have Independent Reading and Masterclass, so be sure to bring in your books when you need them!
Saturday, November 8, 2008
Exam - Week 2
You have a weekend to escape your exam - do it! You need to take a mental break, so that when you return to your writing you can see it in a fresh and new way. You should always try to read like a writer and write like a reader.
Remember - your audience knows nothing about your topic and nothing about the story you are writing (except for maybe local info), so include everything they need to know.
Have a good weekend! The fun continues on Monday and Tuesday!
Remember - your audience knows nothing about your topic and nothing about the story you are writing (except for maybe local info), so include everything they need to know.
Have a good weekend! The fun continues on Monday and Tuesday!
Friday, November 7, 2008
Student Focus
I can see the passion in Orhun's eyes. Orhun has goals set ahead of him and he would like to achieve them all. However, he wants to help bring everyone else with him also. He is the kind of person you want on your team and maybe even leading your team.
Here is a glimpse of Orhun Gural...
Full Name: Orhun Gural
No second name or anything?: No. Well, Mehmet Orhun Gural. I hate that name. It is an old name, not a modern name.
Place of Birth: In İstanbul –International Hospital.
Why were you born here?: My mom was born in Ankara and then she lived in the South for a time and then came to Uskudar American. My dad has always lived in Istanbul.
Age: 15 yrs old
What hobbies do you have?: Tennis. Watching TV. I have been playing tennis since I was 7 and I also like cars.
What TV shows do you like?: I like Lost and House. My sister used to watch them, so I started watching them too.
Where do you want to go to school: I want to go to the US. Like Stanford or UPENN maybe. I would go to Washington U. also. I know they have good chemical engineering programs.
Brothers or sisters?: Yeah. I have a sister. She is 19. She is at Washington U. in St. Louis.
At 8pm at night you are: Listening to my favorite music at a very high volume.
Favorite movie: I like French - La Vie en Rose. It is about the life of a really famous French singer. I like Fahrenheit 911 and Persepolis.
Favorite Holiday: When I was in the 8th grade we went to Moscow for ISTA. I really enjoyed it. We performed for people and got to watch some performances.
Something people would be surprised to know about you: I know how to read Russian. I opened Wikipedia and taught the letters to myself. I can just read a few words. (Mrs Clark: I am really impressed.)
Who is your hero?: My sister is my hero.
One word that describes you: Warm. I am a warm-blooded person. Like sympathetic.
Here is a glimpse of Orhun Gural...
Full Name: Orhun Gural
No second name or anything?: No. Well, Mehmet Orhun Gural. I hate that name. It is an old name, not a modern name.
Place of Birth: In İstanbul –International Hospital.
Why were you born here?: My mom was born in Ankara and then she lived in the South for a time and then came to Uskudar American. My dad has always lived in Istanbul.
Age: 15 yrs old
What hobbies do you have?: Tennis. Watching TV. I have been playing tennis since I was 7 and I also like cars.
What TV shows do you like?: I like Lost and House. My sister used to watch them, so I started watching them too.
Where do you want to go to school: I want to go to the US. Like Stanford or UPENN maybe. I would go to Washington U. also. I know they have good chemical engineering programs.
Brothers or sisters?: Yeah. I have a sister. She is 19. She is at Washington U. in St. Louis.
At 8pm at night you are: Listening to my favorite music at a very high volume.
Favorite movie: I like French - La Vie en Rose. It is about the life of a really famous French singer. I like Fahrenheit 911 and Persepolis.
Favorite Holiday: When I was in the 8th grade we went to Moscow for ISTA. I really enjoyed it. We performed for people and got to watch some performances.
Something people would be surprised to know about you: I know how to read Russian. I opened Wikipedia and taught the letters to myself. I can just read a few words. (Mrs Clark: I am really impressed.)
Who is your hero?: My sister is my hero.
One word that describes you: Warm. I am a warm-blooded person. Like sympathetic.
Thursday, November 6, 2008
Exam
What sorts of things are you revising?
Did you think about any of these?:
-sentence variety (length)
-reported speech phrases (attributions)
-specific/active verbs
-about 20-40 words per sentence
-at least 10 (5 direct + 5 indirect) quotes
-making sure the most important information comes first and least important information comes last
Make sure you are reading English web sites about newspaper writing and informing yourself about different techniques you can use to refine, revise, and rework your article.
Happy Editing!
Did you think about any of these?:
-sentence variety (length)
-reported speech phrases (attributions)
-specific/active verbs
-about 20-40 words per sentence
-at least 10 (5 direct + 5 indirect) quotes
-making sure the most important information comes first and least important information comes last
Make sure you are reading English web sites about newspaper writing and informing yourself about different techniques you can use to refine, revise, and rework your article.
Happy Editing!
Wednesday, November 5, 2008
Tuesday, November 4, 2008
Exam
Don't tell me TOO much about how today went, but how did it go? Were you able to finish the first draft in time? Was all the preparation we did in class helpful?
Now, the next few days will be used for revision of the work. Be sure to use the advice of your fellow students and what you know about newspaper writing to write a great article. Remember to avoid repeating information in your quotations that you have already reported. Also, make sure that lead is really good and DO NOT retell the story of the play. You need to use the story of the play to focus on the news story you are covering, but you definitely do not need to retell the story of the play.
Good luck out there!
Now, the next few days will be used for revision of the work. Be sure to use the advice of your fellow students and what you know about newspaper writing to write a great article. Remember to avoid repeating information in your quotations that you have already reported. Also, make sure that lead is really good and DO NOT retell the story of the play. You need to use the story of the play to focus on the news story you are covering, but you definitely do not need to retell the story of the play.
Good luck out there!
Monday, November 3, 2008
Exam Preparation
Write a newspaper article. Tonight, while you are worrying about what you will be faced with tomorrow, write a newspaper article. Come up with a Hard News article and practice writing something. Even if it is not perfect, it will give you a sense of what you will be expected to create tomorrow morning.
And remember, you are smart and your English is really really good! So I will wish you good luck, but I don't think you will need it.
And remember, you are smart and your English is really really good! So I will wish you good luck, but I don't think you will need it.
Saturday, November 1, 2008
Hello!
Ms. Sevimli was not able to write a note since she was wrapping up the grades and things from her 10th grade classes for Ms. Feitosa, but I will tell you - you guys are in good hands.
Tomorrow she will explain everything you need to know for the exam and what she expects of you when class begins. Help her out with your names and make sure you pay attention to everything she says. Be sure to bring in your news articles so she can see how you write and get a sense of what you need help with for the exam. This will also show her how dedicated of a student you are to English.
Be good and enjoy! Use the comments this week to ask anything about the exam or anything you need clarification with so that the transition between myself and Ms. Sevimli is a smooth one.
Tomorrow she will explain everything you need to know for the exam and what she expects of you when class begins. Help her out with your names and make sure you pay attention to everything she says. Be sure to bring in your news articles so she can see how you write and get a sense of what you need help with for the exam. This will also show her how dedicated of a student you are to English.
Be good and enjoy! Use the comments this week to ask anything about the exam or anything you need clarification with so that the transition between myself and Ms. Sevimli is a smooth one.
A Goodbye Note (for now)
Dear Sweet Students,
I have really enjoyed our time reading An Inspector Calls together as well as writing Newspaper Articles and practicing newspaper writing styles. You have all been really great to work with and I really enjoy your desire to learn and practice English. Reading and writing in more than one language as well as speaking in more than one language while reading literature and trying to understand the stories is not always easy, but I think you are all really bright and completely capable of succeeding at this task.
I think you are all well prepared for the exam and Ms. Sevimli will be really happy teaching you for the few months you all have together. If you ever need anything, feel free to email me and I will respond from home. (celinec@kocschool.k12.tr)
I will be expecting you all to continue to tell your stories and post to the class blog. Ms. Sevimli and I will be updating the blog together and keeping you informed as to what is going on in class and outside of class.
I hope you enjoy Ms. Sevimli too! Take care of yourselves and keep in touch via the internet!!
Sincerely,
Mrs. Clark (and the little baby)
I have really enjoyed our time reading An Inspector Calls together as well as writing Newspaper Articles and practicing newspaper writing styles. You have all been really great to work with and I really enjoy your desire to learn and practice English. Reading and writing in more than one language as well as speaking in more than one language while reading literature and trying to understand the stories is not always easy, but I think you are all really bright and completely capable of succeeding at this task.
I think you are all well prepared for the exam and Ms. Sevimli will be really happy teaching you for the few months you all have together. If you ever need anything, feel free to email me and I will respond from home. (celinec@kocschool.k12.tr)
I will be expecting you all to continue to tell your stories and post to the class blog. Ms. Sevimli and I will be updating the blog together and keeping you informed as to what is going on in class and outside of class.
I hope you enjoy Ms. Sevimli too! Take care of yourselves and keep in touch via the internet!!
Sincerely,
Mrs. Clark (and the little baby)
Friday, October 31, 2008
Student Focus
Nurefşan is the kind of girl who shows her emotions on her sleeve. She always seems like she has other ideas in her mind that are her own and she lets no one else determine what they will be. Nurefşan is full of surprises and likes to test people in authority to make sure they know what they are doing. She is cute and spunky and everything you would want in a cheerleader, but she is definitely not a cheerleader.
Introducing Nurefşan!
Full Name: Nurefşan Erkan
What does your name mean?: My name means “light source.” "Nur" is the light, which is a very special light and “efşan” means the source.
Place of Birth: In İstanbul –Kadikoy Şifa Hospital.
Why were you born here?: My parents were living in Kayseri, but like 10 yrs before I was born they moved to İstanbul for my dad’s job. Kayseri was small those days, so they wanted to move into a bigger, more popular place for culture and education.
Age: 14 yrs old
Locations you lived: When I was like 2 yrs old, I was kind of living in Seattle. I mean, we were coming to İstanbul those days cause my father was still here, but we were spending some days in Seattle because my brother was going to school there. Also, we have a house in Orlando, FL. And we don’t have a green card, unfortunately. My brother is not living in the States, but the job he has here he also has there. At the moment he is working with my dad, but he is a drag racer and makes racing cars.
What hobbies do you have?: Spending time on the computer and talking to my friend Teo. Also, going out to skateboard.
Where do you want to go to school: I want to go to school in Canada or Norway. I want to go to Canada cause I have lots of friends there whom I want to meet and spend time with. That’s why I want to go to Canada. I want to go to Norway because Sofie and Teo are there and lots and lots of people are there who I want to see. I also think Japan would be nice because I like the culture, but it would be hard I think.
Brothers or sisters?: I have a sister and a brother and also a person who is like a twin to me. My sister is 26 yrs old and my brother is 28 yrs old. And my twin is 14. He lives in Norway and his name is Teo. I met him through a friend, but we never met each other, we only talk on the internet.
What do your parents think about this?: They like him because he is a very cute person, but they don’t like the way we look. We wear black and listen to metal music and my parents don’t like that.
At 8pm at night you are: I would be at home looking at my laptop screen and “talking” to someone in a very hyper way.
Embarrassing moment: When I was in the States we were walking in the mall, and then there was this very cute boy. I was only 12 yrs old and I think he was about 15 or 16 and I was begging to hug him. It was kind of stupid, but what can I do, he was so cute.
Favorite movie: I like The Fast and the Furious series.
Favorite Holiday: Halloween. We are having a party at my friend’s house. It is a good time for scary kids to scare kids.
World’s worst problem: People don’t care about animal rights and also Global Warming.
Something people would be surprised to know about you: I have a husband...just joking...ummm...I am a half vegetarian. I don’t eat meat and things, but sometimes I just can’t resist. I am trying to be a vegetarian. That is what I really want to be, but it is kind of hard because of my family.
Who is your hero?: My hero is Audrey Kitching – she is a model and designer in the United States. And my other hero is my friends Chris, Teo and Sofie.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: Whether to go to Canada or Norway as an exchange student.
One word that describes you: Hyper.
Reminder: Write a final draft of either your "Büyükada" article OR your "Strike at the Birling Factory" article for Monday. Ms. Sevimli will be collecting them.
Introducing Nurefşan!
Full Name: Nurefşan Erkan
What does your name mean?: My name means “light source.” "Nur" is the light, which is a very special light and “efşan” means the source.
Place of Birth: In İstanbul –Kadikoy Şifa Hospital.
Why were you born here?: My parents were living in Kayseri, but like 10 yrs before I was born they moved to İstanbul for my dad’s job. Kayseri was small those days, so they wanted to move into a bigger, more popular place for culture and education.
Age: 14 yrs old
Locations you lived: When I was like 2 yrs old, I was kind of living in Seattle. I mean, we were coming to İstanbul those days cause my father was still here, but we were spending some days in Seattle because my brother was going to school there. Also, we have a house in Orlando, FL. And we don’t have a green card, unfortunately. My brother is not living in the States, but the job he has here he also has there. At the moment he is working with my dad, but he is a drag racer and makes racing cars.
What hobbies do you have?: Spending time on the computer and talking to my friend Teo. Also, going out to skateboard.
Where do you want to go to school: I want to go to school in Canada or Norway. I want to go to Canada cause I have lots of friends there whom I want to meet and spend time with. That’s why I want to go to Canada. I want to go to Norway because Sofie and Teo are there and lots and lots of people are there who I want to see. I also think Japan would be nice because I like the culture, but it would be hard I think.
Brothers or sisters?: I have a sister and a brother and also a person who is like a twin to me. My sister is 26 yrs old and my brother is 28 yrs old. And my twin is 14. He lives in Norway and his name is Teo. I met him through a friend, but we never met each other, we only talk on the internet.
What do your parents think about this?: They like him because he is a very cute person, but they don’t like the way we look. We wear black and listen to metal music and my parents don’t like that.
At 8pm at night you are: I would be at home looking at my laptop screen and “talking” to someone in a very hyper way.
Embarrassing moment: When I was in the States we were walking in the mall, and then there was this very cute boy. I was only 12 yrs old and I think he was about 15 or 16 and I was begging to hug him. It was kind of stupid, but what can I do, he was so cute.
Favorite movie: I like The Fast and the Furious series.
Favorite Holiday: Halloween. We are having a party at my friend’s house. It is a good time for scary kids to scare kids.
World’s worst problem: People don’t care about animal rights and also Global Warming.
Something people would be surprised to know about you: I have a husband...just joking...ummm...I am a half vegetarian. I don’t eat meat and things, but sometimes I just can’t resist. I am trying to be a vegetarian. That is what I really want to be, but it is kind of hard because of my family.
Who is your hero?: My hero is Audrey Kitching – she is a model and designer in the United States. And my other hero is my friends Chris, Teo and Sofie.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: Whether to go to Canada or Norway as an exchange student.
One word that describes you: Hyper.
Reminder: Write a final draft of either your "Büyükada" article OR your "Strike at the Birling Factory" article for Monday. Ms. Sevimli will be collecting them.
Thursday, October 30, 2008
Büyükada Week
How has writing the second article been going? Is it easier or harder after writing the first? Are there any new difficulties or anything that became easier the second time around?
A question about order came up today -- think most important information to least important information. For instance in the Strike Article: lead that includes information about what happened during the strike (most important) to a quote about what the lawyer thinks the outcome of the strike might be (least important).
So - depending on the focus of your article, you need to determine what you think the most important information is for the reader of the newspaper and for the story itself and what the least important information is for the reader and the story. It will change from article to article.
A question about order came up today -- think most important information to least important information. For instance in the Strike Article: lead that includes information about what happened during the strike (most important) to a quote about what the lawyer thinks the outcome of the strike might be (least important).
So - depending on the focus of your article, you need to determine what you think the most important information is for the reader of the newspaper and for the story itself and what the least important information is for the reader and the story. It will change from article to article.
Wednesday, October 29, 2008
Tuesday, October 28, 2008
Büyükada Week
What is the best quote you have from your interview subject from the Büyükada interview? Post it in the comments and explain why it is so good.
Your Büyükada article drafts are due for the next class you have (my last class with you :(). So glad blogger is back!! Hopefully it will not go away again!!
Yay!
Your Büyükada article drafts are due for the next class you have (my last class with you :(). So glad blogger is back!! Hopefully it will not go away again!!
Yay!
Monday, October 27, 2008
Büyükada Week
No leads should ever be the same!
I want you to post your lead for your Buyukada Times article in the comments and claim it as yours. No one else can use the same exact lead after it has been posted. I will also give feedback in the comments on your leads.
Happy article writing!!
I want you to post your lead for your Buyukada Times article in the comments and claim it as yours. No one else can use the same exact lead after it has been posted. I will also give feedback in the comments on your leads.
Happy article writing!!
Sunday, October 26, 2008
Strike at Birling Factory Week
Be sure to bring in your second drafts of the Strike at the Birling Factory article tomorrow during class time. (9H - even though you have Independent Reading, I am still going to collect the second draft from you. Please bring it because I will not accept it from anyone on Tuesday).
Saturday, October 25, 2008
Strike at Birling Factory Week
What are some of the problems you are having with your second drafts? What is hard about writing the article and what is easy?
Friday, October 24, 2008
Student Focus
When I first met Merve's smiling face, I knew she would be the type of student who would not stop working. Merve seems like the kind of girl who is serious about her work, but also knows how to relax when the time comes. She is fun to be around because she never says anything she doesn't mean, and she always means what she says. Introducing Merve!
Full Name: Merve Ekici
What does your name mean?: A little hill. My sister’s name is Mina and mine Merve – they are both like “little hill” but next to each other.
Place of Birth: In İstanbul at the Florence Nightingale Hospital.
Since when has your family been here?: My mother has always lived here. My dad lived in Bandırma when he was very small and then he came to İstanbul and has lived here in İstanbul much longer.
Age: 15 yrs.
Locations you lived: Always lived in İstanbul.
What hobbies do you have?: I play tennis. I have done lots of things, but I always get bored or leave it. I wish my mother was a little more strict about it because when I was little I rode ponies and horses. I loved it. I love horses. But then I said, “Mom I don’t want to go.” So my mother said, “okay.” So maybe now I would be a good horse rider if she hadn't said "okay." I played basketball. I stopped playing it too. I was the captain of the team. I played it very well and then I stopped playing basketball when I started working on doing well on the OKS. And now I have played tennis for the past 1.5 yrs. I ran too. I was first in İstanbul when I was little.
Where do you want to go to school: Because of my sister I am thinking I will go to the US too, but maybe I would prefer Europe. I haven’t decided yet. My mom doesn’t want us to go to the US because it is very far and she says she will miss us. I don’t know – I haven’t decided yet.
Brothers or sisters?: I have one sister – Mina. She is 18 yrs old and she wants to go to University in the States. She is at Notre Dame Desion. I was at a French school, but it wasn’t very good. If I went to the same school as my sıster I would not have come to Koç.
At 8pm at night you are: It depends on the day, but if it’s a school day I would be watching television or maybe studying.
Embarrassing moment: When I was in Elementary School I walked out of the toilet with my skirt tucked into my underwear. Luckily one of my friend’s told me about it and I went and fixed it.
Favorite movie: I cry a lot. I cry even during Finding Nemo. The movie that touched me the most and I cried a lot while watching is The Notebook.
Favorite Holiday: After school finished my friends and family all go to Bodrum and stay for one month because we have a summer home there. Sometimes I go to camps and things like that, so summer is my favorite holiday.
World’s worst problem: People.
Something people would be surprised to know about you: I am not a very surprising person. I don’t know.
Who is your hero?: My mom. She helps me very much and we can talk about everything and she is always there when I need her. We fight a lot, but....I don’t know, I just love my mom.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: I always think about how I will get through tomorrow. How will it be...how will I handle it...I am a very planned and organized person, so I can’t do anything without planning and organizing.
One word that describes you: Planned.
Reminder: Strike at the Birling Factory articles are due on Monday for both classes. No assignments will be accepted late!
Also - I need more students! I need at least 9 more students to interview in order to cover the Fridays I will be gone for. Please leave your comment in the comment box if you would like to be interviewed next week! I can't wait to speak with all of you!
Full Name: Merve Ekici
What does your name mean?: A little hill. My sister’s name is Mina and mine Merve – they are both like “little hill” but next to each other.
Place of Birth: In İstanbul at the Florence Nightingale Hospital.
Since when has your family been here?: My mother has always lived here. My dad lived in Bandırma when he was very small and then he came to İstanbul and has lived here in İstanbul much longer.
Age: 15 yrs.
Locations you lived: Always lived in İstanbul.
What hobbies do you have?: I play tennis. I have done lots of things, but I always get bored or leave it. I wish my mother was a little more strict about it because when I was little I rode ponies and horses. I loved it. I love horses. But then I said, “Mom I don’t want to go.” So my mother said, “okay.” So maybe now I would be a good horse rider if she hadn't said "okay." I played basketball. I stopped playing it too. I was the captain of the team. I played it very well and then I stopped playing basketball when I started working on doing well on the OKS. And now I have played tennis for the past 1.5 yrs. I ran too. I was first in İstanbul when I was little.
Where do you want to go to school: Because of my sister I am thinking I will go to the US too, but maybe I would prefer Europe. I haven’t decided yet. My mom doesn’t want us to go to the US because it is very far and she says she will miss us. I don’t know – I haven’t decided yet.
Brothers or sisters?: I have one sister – Mina. She is 18 yrs old and she wants to go to University in the States. She is at Notre Dame Desion. I was at a French school, but it wasn’t very good. If I went to the same school as my sıster I would not have come to Koç.
At 8pm at night you are: It depends on the day, but if it’s a school day I would be watching television or maybe studying.
Embarrassing moment: When I was in Elementary School I walked out of the toilet with my skirt tucked into my underwear. Luckily one of my friend’s told me about it and I went and fixed it.
Favorite movie: I cry a lot. I cry even during Finding Nemo. The movie that touched me the most and I cried a lot while watching is The Notebook.
Favorite Holiday: After school finished my friends and family all go to Bodrum and stay for one month because we have a summer home there. Sometimes I go to camps and things like that, so summer is my favorite holiday.
World’s worst problem: People.
Something people would be surprised to know about you: I am not a very surprising person. I don’t know.
Who is your hero?: My mom. She helps me very much and we can talk about everything and she is always there when I need her. We fight a lot, but....I don’t know, I just love my mom.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: I always think about how I will get through tomorrow. How will it be...how will I handle it...I am a very planned and organized person, so I can’t do anything without planning and organizing.
One word that describes you: Planned.
Reminder: Strike at the Birling Factory articles are due on Monday for both classes. No assignments will be accepted late!
Also - I need more students! I need at least 9 more students to interview in order to cover the Fridays I will be gone for. Please leave your comment in the comment box if you would like to be interviewed next week! I can't wait to speak with all of you!
Thursday, October 23, 2008
Strike at Birling Factory Week
How will writing the article about the Strike be different from writing the article about Büyükada? Why will it be different? What part of the newspaper will it be in? Is it soft news or hard news?
Reminder:
Your Oral Grades will consist of the assignments you have been doing up until the start of the exam. This includes comments on the class blog and maintaining and updating your own personal blog. You will also receive grades for the interviews you conducted for the Strike as well as the articles you will be writing about the strike and about Büyükada.
You can also do assignments from the Enrichment Folder in 302E as well as revise/correct any assignments that I have looked at and returned to you according to this post.
Reminder:
Your Oral Grades will consist of the assignments you have been doing up until the start of the exam. This includes comments on the class blog and maintaining and updating your own personal blog. You will also receive grades for the interviews you conducted for the Strike as well as the articles you will be writing about the strike and about Büyükada.
You can also do assignments from the Enrichment Folder in 302E as well as revise/correct any assignments that I have looked at and returned to you according to this post.
Wednesday, October 22, 2008
What's Up Wednesday
Strike Week
What is the best quote from the interviews conducted in class and why? Write the quote in the comments and be sure to tell me why you think it is good for your story.
Reminder: 9G - bring in completed interviews on Thursday!
9H - bring in completed interviews on Friday!
We will be writing Strike articles, so you will need those worksheets in order to write strong articles.
PLANS (from now until the exam):
Th/F - We will discuss leads and quote placement
M - 9G/H - You will bring in a first draft of Strike article
- 9G - You will write first draft of Buyukada Times article
T - 9H - You will write first draft of Buyukada Times article
- 9G - You will bring in second draft of Buyukada Times
- 9G/H - Masterclass
W - NO SCHOOL
Th - 9G - I will return Strike articles and discuss feedback
F - 9H - You will bring in second draft of Buyukada Times article
- I will return Strike articles and discuss feedback
What is the best quote from the interviews conducted in class and why? Write the quote in the comments and be sure to tell me why you think it is good for your story.
Reminder: 9G - bring in completed interviews on Thursday!
9H - bring in completed interviews on Friday!
We will be writing Strike articles, so you will need those worksheets in order to write strong articles.
PLANS (from now until the exam):
Th/F - We will discuss leads and quote placement
M - 9G/H - You will bring in a first draft of Strike article
- 9G - You will write first draft of Buyukada Times article
T - 9H - You will write first draft of Buyukada Times article
- 9G - You will bring in second draft of Buyukada Times
- 9G/H - Masterclass
W - NO SCHOOL
Th - 9G - I will return Strike articles and discuss feedback
F - 9H - You will bring in second draft of Buyukada Times article
- I will return Strike articles and discuss feedback
Tuesday, October 21, 2008
Strike at Birling Factory Week
What will the focus of your story be? Will you focus on the business aspects or will you focus on the human story of the workers?
Which one will you choose and why? How will choosing one or the other change the lead of your story?
Which one will you choose and why? How will choosing one or the other change the lead of your story?
Monday, October 20, 2008
Strike at Birling Factory Week
You will be conducting interviews in class for the "Strike at the Birling Factory" article. Remember you are a reporter when you ask the questions, but you are a character when you are being interviewed.
Be sure to get the notes from your own interview from a group member after the interviewing process is complete. Also remember to be "in character" when you are being interviewed. It will help the other group members to get really good quotes and to create really strong articles!
Be sure to get the notes from your own interview from a group member after the interviewing process is complete. Also remember to be "in character" when you are being interviewed. It will help the other group members to get really good quotes and to create really strong articles!
Sunday, October 19, 2008
Play's Conclusion
Post a quote in the comments section that represents Arthur Birling's and the Inspector's views of responsibility.
How do they differ from each other?
How do they differ from each other?
Saturday, October 18, 2008
Ending Your Story
http://www.projo.com/words/tip506.htm
The following article is full of more suggestions about how to finish your article. It is about planning ahead.
What do you do when you can't find the ending?
What do you do when you can't find the ending?
Re-read your beginning. Why did you open that way?
Ask yourself what the story is about. What is the last thing you want the reader to remember?
Read through your notes to see if you've included everything of importance. Most news stories don't require a finely crafted ending. Just stop.
Often the best endings bring you back to the beginning. Look for ways to make that work for you.
Write a couple of different versions of the lead. Sometimes, a second-choice lead makes a great ending.
Just stop. Sometimes an abrupt ending is better than three or four aimless paragraphs in search of an ending.
It's there. You've already written it. Go back and find it.
Look to the future. What is happening next in a running story? What can we expect? Choose your ending before you start writing. Your first choice may not be the final one, but the process helps in mapping out the flow and line of the story. Also, it is much easier to change an ending than to search for one.
The following article is full of more suggestions about how to finish your article. It is about planning ahead.
What do you do when you can't find the ending?
What do you do when you can't find the ending?
Re-read your beginning. Why did you open that way?
Ask yourself what the story is about. What is the last thing you want the reader to remember?
Read through your notes to see if you've included everything of importance. Most news stories don't require a finely crafted ending. Just stop.
Often the best endings bring you back to the beginning. Look for ways to make that work for you.
Write a couple of different versions of the lead. Sometimes, a second-choice lead makes a great ending.
Just stop. Sometimes an abrupt ending is better than three or four aimless paragraphs in search of an ending.
It's there. You've already written it. Go back and find it.
Look to the future. What is happening next in a running story? What can we expect? Choose your ending before you start writing. Your first choice may not be the final one, but the process helps in mapping out the flow and line of the story. Also, it is much easier to change an ending than to search for one.
Friday, October 17, 2008
Student Focus
9G REMINDER: Bring in an English news article for Monday. Use the news sources I listed in this post.
Ece came late to class on the fırst day of school, and I thought, "Oh - so she will be one of those girls." She has come late a few times since then, but she is most definitely NOT "one of those girls." Ece has shown that she likes to think quietly and talk with friends (mostly Aslı) and she has no problem doing both while also getting her work done.
She is deifnitely a good person to become friends with because she is the kind of girl who is able to think for herself and will say things that she means.
Presenting...Ece!
Ece came late to class on the fırst day of school, and I thought, "Oh - so she will be one of those girls." She has come late a few times since then, but she is most definitely NOT "one of those girls." Ece has shown that she likes to think quietly and talk with friends (mostly Aslı) and she has no problem doing both while also getting her work done.
She is deifnitely a good person to become friends with because she is the kind of girl who is able to think for herself and will say things that she means.
Presenting...Ece!
Full Name: Ece Gureylik
What does your name mean?: Queen
Place of Birth: İstanbul – American Hospital
Why were you born there?: My parents have been here for about 20 yrs or something like that.
Age: 14 yrs
Locations you lived: İstanbul. On the Asian side in Suadiye.
What hobbies do you have?: One month ago, I started to ride horses...I was riding horses, but I stopped because of the school, but I just started again.
Where do you want to go to school (university): I am hoping to do the IB program and then go to the US, but I want to go to a “normal” school and then trasfer to an art school. Too many people want to go to university for just art, so I thought it would be better to go to a “normal” school.
Brothers or sisters?: I have a sister. She is 25 yrs old. She is very old. Like, we have 11 yrs between us...almost a generation.
At 8pm at night you are: Usually I am watching television in my home.
Worst habit: I am too talkative.
Embarrassing moment: I don’t have one.
Favorite movie: The Martian Child and The Truman Show.
Favorite Holiday: When I went to Brazil last year because my sister went there for a job with a program. She satyed there for 8 or 9 mths and tried to find sponsors for blind children in Brazil. Brazil has many similarities to Turkey (traffic jams, etc). It was very colorful. There was an ocean. It was the first time I went to the ocean and that’s it. I pretended that it was a normal sea and then a wave came and it was terrible.
World’s worst problem: There are many.
Something people would be surprised to know about you: I have big goals in life and I don’t always share them.
Who is your hero?: No one.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: I want to be in the IB program. It is an important thing for me, and if I can I will choose the IB program.
One word that describes you: Annoying.
Who wants to be next weeks interview subject?? Please respond in the comments section if you want to be next and we can meet during one of the lunch periods next week!
Thursday, October 16, 2008
A Good Lead
9H REMINDER: Bring in an English news article on Friday so we can dissect it. Use the news sources from this post.
http://www.projo.com/words/20030731_tp.htm
The following article is from a writer who was creating a news story. It describes the process of creating a story and choosing a focus for that story. While you read, ask yourself: What will the focus of your news story from Excursion Day be? How will you decide on a lead?
Time takes over in the quest for the right lead
By Michael P. McKinneyJournal Staff Writer
I'm still not sure the right lead ended up on this story about a barge tanker that spilled thousands of gallons of oil into Buzzards Bay off the Massachusetts coast.
I got back to the office close to 6:30 p.m. with a notebook full of imagery: Oil-covered birds near death on examination tables, oil in the water, men in spacesuits shoveling globs off the beach.
But something nagged at me. During a press conference at the Otis Air Force base, officials said a couple of oil masses in Buzzards Bay resisted efforts by ships to clean up the mess. That seemed like big enough news.
The question was: Use a straight-news lead or an anecdotal beginning about dying birds and globs of oil? For a while, I tried to do both -- in one paragraph. But that didn't work.
In the end, with time running out to write, the straightforward lead won, with birds and spacesuits getting the second paragraph.
At first, reporting the story seemed simple. I observed at Buttonwood Park Zoo in New Bedford, Mass., as men and women dunked birds in buckets of detergent and held the birds down to help them fight the oil. Plenty of drama.
But from there, the story became more difficult. It was a second-day look at the fallout of the spill, yet finding the oil everyone was talking about proved elusive. I went to Horseneck Beach in Westport, Mass. Nothing tangible there, other than people sun-bathing. Then I went to Fairhaven, Mass., where photographer Bob Thayer and I finally tracked down oil globs on the beach.
Meanwhile, I had to be mindful of the clock: A press conference was scheduled for the afternoon at Otis Air Force base over on Cape Cod. One piece of advice: The military doesn't always see time the way we do.
I made it to the gate of the base on time. The guards asked me if I had a pass to get on base. I did not. They directed me -- and some other reporters -- to a sort of impound lane. Time marched on. And on. And on. Finally, one soldier checked out all the cars then sent an escort -- at least a half-hour after the press conference started.
As we arrived, reporters streamed out of the building. That sinking feeling set in. We'd missed it.
Military and marine officials agreed to hold a mini-press conference for us. Then it was time to drive back.
Sitting at the computer, the question, as always, was what was this story about? There's no doubt people were worried about the impact the oil might have on the shellfish industry -- a major business for the region. And if those oil masses could not be contained by ships, it seemed they could become a further threat to the people who benefit from the industry.
Still, even with the debate about the top of the story, I found that the rest of it flowed pretty well. When I came to a section about the doctors trying to rescue oil-covered birds, I found that it helped to blank out the rest of the story and begin as if the birds were the lead of the piece:
``Yesterday was about small moments of heroism. In the quarantine building of Buttonwood Park Zoo, in New Bedford, four people in scrubs and plastic gloves tried to rescue birds at the edge of death. There was no time for names. Each bird had only a number.''
I don't know, maybe some version of that could have been the lead. But the clock hit 8:30 p.m. Time to let go of the story.
http://www.projo.com/words/20030731_tp.htm
The following article is from a writer who was creating a news story. It describes the process of creating a story and choosing a focus for that story. While you read, ask yourself: What will the focus of your news story from Excursion Day be? How will you decide on a lead?
Time takes over in the quest for the right lead
By Michael P. McKinneyJournal Staff Writer
I'm still not sure the right lead ended up on this story about a barge tanker that spilled thousands of gallons of oil into Buzzards Bay off the Massachusetts coast.
I got back to the office close to 6:30 p.m. with a notebook full of imagery: Oil-covered birds near death on examination tables, oil in the water, men in spacesuits shoveling globs off the beach.
But something nagged at me. During a press conference at the Otis Air Force base, officials said a couple of oil masses in Buzzards Bay resisted efforts by ships to clean up the mess. That seemed like big enough news.
The question was: Use a straight-news lead or an anecdotal beginning about dying birds and globs of oil? For a while, I tried to do both -- in one paragraph. But that didn't work.
In the end, with time running out to write, the straightforward lead won, with birds and spacesuits getting the second paragraph.
At first, reporting the story seemed simple. I observed at Buttonwood Park Zoo in New Bedford, Mass., as men and women dunked birds in buckets of detergent and held the birds down to help them fight the oil. Plenty of drama.
But from there, the story became more difficult. It was a second-day look at the fallout of the spill, yet finding the oil everyone was talking about proved elusive. I went to Horseneck Beach in Westport, Mass. Nothing tangible there, other than people sun-bathing. Then I went to Fairhaven, Mass., where photographer Bob Thayer and I finally tracked down oil globs on the beach.
Meanwhile, I had to be mindful of the clock: A press conference was scheduled for the afternoon at Otis Air Force base over on Cape Cod. One piece of advice: The military doesn't always see time the way we do.
I made it to the gate of the base on time. The guards asked me if I had a pass to get on base. I did not. They directed me -- and some other reporters -- to a sort of impound lane. Time marched on. And on. And on. Finally, one soldier checked out all the cars then sent an escort -- at least a half-hour after the press conference started.
As we arrived, reporters streamed out of the building. That sinking feeling set in. We'd missed it.
Military and marine officials agreed to hold a mini-press conference for us. Then it was time to drive back.
Sitting at the computer, the question, as always, was what was this story about? There's no doubt people were worried about the impact the oil might have on the shellfish industry -- a major business for the region. And if those oil masses could not be contained by ships, it seemed they could become a further threat to the people who benefit from the industry.
Still, even with the debate about the top of the story, I found that the rest of it flowed pretty well. When I came to a section about the doctors trying to rescue oil-covered birds, I found that it helped to blank out the rest of the story and begin as if the birds were the lead of the piece:
``Yesterday was about small moments of heroism. In the quarantine building of Buttonwood Park Zoo, in New Bedford, four people in scrubs and plastic gloves tried to rescue birds at the edge of death. There was no time for names. Each bird had only a number.''
I don't know, maybe some version of that could have been the lead. But the clock hit 8:30 p.m. Time to let go of the story.
Wednesday, October 15, 2008
What's Up Wednesday
Who is the most responsible character? If we believe that each character has a partial responsibility to "Eva Smith," who did the most damage to cause her downfall? Explain your response and argue against other students who comment.
Tuesday, October 14, 2008
Büyükada Times
What a beautiful day we had on the island! I started my day with a carriage ride to the top of the island where some colleagues and I had some snacks and some tea and enjoyed the beautiful view. What a great place to be when not many people are there. We saw some horses on the way
and many other carriages and people enjoying themselves! 
My husband and I visited on Children's Day last year, and it was awful. We walked and walked and really went nowhere and then walked and walked some more and got some ice cream and a waffle and left the island. At least we can always end the day with some ice cream and a waffle even when the island is crowded!
I loved seeing all of you enjoying your time together and talking to people in the island. I was happy to see some students immediately plop down next to some of the elderly men who were sitting on the benches on the water's edge. I imagine not many people stop to talk, so it was nice to see young kids talking with older people in such a positive way.
I also thought that it was ingenious of some of you to interview your horse and carriage driver while he drove you to the top of the island. It was very resourceful and a good use of time. I only hope they realized you were sincerely interested in what they had to say.
Good job my little journalists! I hope your articles are as good as they already sound!
Monday, October 13, 2008
Newspaper Writing
What is a lead? Look at my post from two days ago and tell me what you think a lead is.
Sunday, October 12, 2008
Type it Up! AND Print it Out!
Make sure you take the information you gathered on Wednesday (Excursion Day) and type it up into a clean format for Monday (both classes!). You can embellish (add to) the responses you got from the person you interviewed.
Many of you had rough notes, so I just want to see it "cleaned up." We will soon be writing newspaper articles using the primary source (the person you interviewed) you have, so keep reading the English news sources I gave you in this post.
Many of you had rough notes, so I just want to see it "cleaned up." We will soon be writing newspaper articles using the primary source (the person you interviewed) you have, so keep reading the English news sources I gave you in this post.
Saturday, October 11, 2008
A Lead
What question words does this paragraph answer?
Article Title: Russians Vacate Buffer Zones in Georgia
ERGNETI, Georgia - The Georgian authorities reclaimed this ransacked village on Wednesday after it had been under Russian control since August. They kissed one another in congratulation, cleared rotting food from the shelves of a grocery, and got down to serious business: getting a look at the enemy.
Article Title: Russians Vacate Buffer Zones in Georgia
ERGNETI, Georgia - The Georgian authorities reclaimed this ransacked village on Wednesday after it had been under Russian control since August. They kissed one another in congratulation, cleared rotting food from the shelves of a grocery, and got down to serious business: getting a look at the enemy.
Friday, October 10, 2008
Student Focus
Can has been out of school for quite some time. I thought maybe some of you missed him, so I thought he would be a good subject to interview this week. He seems to be the man of mystery, although I do know that he has been at Koç longer than some of his teachers!
Introducing the always smiling, Can Peker!!
Full Name: Onur Can Peker
What does your name mean?: Can = Life and Peker is like, “Pek” = lots/many and “er” means soldier, so lots of soldiers and Onur = Honor
Why did your parents name you that?: It is just a name “Onur” it is not on my passport.
Place of Birth: Milwalkee, Wisconsin, USA
Why were you born there?: My parents were living there. My father was working and my mother was studying.
Age: 14 ... and a half. I was born in January and now we are in October.
Locations you have lived: I lived in Milwalkee for 2 yrs and then we moved back to İstanbul in Beykoz.
What hobbies do you have?: Playing tenis, playing soccer, water skiing and wakeboarding.
Brothers or sisters?: I have 2 twin sisters. They are 2 yrs younger than me. They are going to MEF. I like them.
What schools did you go to?: I was in a British school when I was in Kindergarten and then I started at the Koc School in 1st grade.
At 8pm at night you are: Watching TV in my bedroom or in the kitchen or with family in the living room. On Mondays and Wednesdays I have English lessons...just talking lesson.
Worst habit: I don’t have any.
Embarrassing moment: I don’t have any.
Favorite movie: Zohan – Adam Sandler’s movie, Get Smart, 88 minutes. I watched them recently and I like those. I watch a lot of movies. I can’t remember all the movies, so I just mention the new ones.
Favorite Holiday: I like going to Miami. I go there 3 times a year because it is summer everytime. I like summers and they don’t have a winter.
World’s worst problem: Global warming because when I live in İstanbul, I want it to snow. I like cold when it snows. So, if it is cold without snow, I don’t like it and that is the problem with Global warming.
Who is your hero?: I don’t know...like who...I don’t want to be like someone, I want to be like me.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: I am thinking, what should I become in the future. What job should I pick. When I was 3 yrs old, I wanted to be a policeman. Now, I am sure I don’t want to be a policeman, but I am not sure what I want to be.
One word that describes you: Lazy.
Introducing the always smiling, Can Peker!!
Full Name: Onur Can Peker
What does your name mean?: Can = Life and Peker is like, “Pek” = lots/many and “er” means soldier, so lots of soldiers and Onur = Honor
Why did your parents name you that?: It is just a name “Onur” it is not on my passport.
Place of Birth: Milwalkee, Wisconsin, USA
Why were you born there?: My parents were living there. My father was working and my mother was studying.
Age: 14 ... and a half. I was born in January and now we are in October.
Locations you have lived: I lived in Milwalkee for 2 yrs and then we moved back to İstanbul in Beykoz.
What hobbies do you have?: Playing tenis, playing soccer, water skiing and wakeboarding.
Brothers or sisters?: I have 2 twin sisters. They are 2 yrs younger than me. They are going to MEF. I like them.
What schools did you go to?: I was in a British school when I was in Kindergarten and then I started at the Koc School in 1st grade.
At 8pm at night you are: Watching TV in my bedroom or in the kitchen or with family in the living room. On Mondays and Wednesdays I have English lessons...just talking lesson.
Worst habit: I don’t have any.
Embarrassing moment: I don’t have any.
Favorite movie: Zohan – Adam Sandler’s movie, Get Smart, 88 minutes. I watched them recently and I like those. I watch a lot of movies. I can’t remember all the movies, so I just mention the new ones.
Favorite Holiday: I like going to Miami. I go there 3 times a year because it is summer everytime. I like summers and they don’t have a winter.
World’s worst problem: Global warming because when I live in İstanbul, I want it to snow. I like cold when it snows. So, if it is cold without snow, I don’t like it and that is the problem with Global warming.
Who is your hero?: I don’t know...like who...I don’t want to be like someone, I want to be like me.
Biggest decision you are thinking about right now: I am thinking, what should I become in the future. What job should I pick. When I was 3 yrs old, I wanted to be a policeman. Now, I am sure I don’t want to be a policeman, but I am not sure what I want to be.
One word that describes you: Lazy.
Thursday, October 9, 2008
Grading/Returning Homework
On almost all assignments that you turn in to me I will underline areas of your writing that can use correction either in your English Grammar or Spelling or Punctuation. I will not tell you what it is, but I will simply underline it.
If at anytime during the unit we are working in, you would like to fix the English and improve the assignment that you handed in once, you can hand in another copy of the assignment with the corrections made, BUT you also need to hand in the original with it.
I will only accept the corrected assignments before the end of the unit. For instance, if we do an assignment while we are reading An Inspector Calls, you must turn in the corrected version BEFORE the exam for An Inspector Calls.
Just like the Enrichment Folder, you will NOT receive EXTRA points, but you will receive an additional homework grade for correcting/revising the assignment. If you have questions, please ask them in the Comments section.
Keep an eye out for Can Peker's interview coming tomorrow!
If at anytime during the unit we are working in, you would like to fix the English and improve the assignment that you handed in once, you can hand in another copy of the assignment with the corrections made, BUT you also need to hand in the original with it.
I will only accept the corrected assignments before the end of the unit. For instance, if we do an assignment while we are reading An Inspector Calls, you must turn in the corrected version BEFORE the exam for An Inspector Calls.
Just like the Enrichment Folder, you will NOT receive EXTRA points, but you will receive an additional homework grade for correcting/revising the assignment. If you have questions, please ask them in the Comments section.
Keep an eye out for Can Peker's interview coming tomorrow!
Excursion Day
Please email me any Excursion Day pictures you guys took yesterday!
If you have a lot, just send me your top 3 pictures. Be sure to email them to this address: celinec@kocschool.k12.tr
I will write a post about my day with some pictures for Monday. Keep an eye out - you might see your face on the blog!
If you have a lot, just send me your top 3 pictures. Be sure to email them to this address: celinec@kocschool.k12.tr
I will write a post about my day with some pictures for Monday. Keep an eye out - you might see your face on the blog!
Wednesday, October 8, 2008
What's Up Wednesday
Responsibility
What kind of responsibility do we have toward our family members?
-our friends?
-our neighbors?
-people we pass in the streets?
-people we met on facebook or whose blog we read?
-people we have never met?
What kind of responsibility do we have toward our family members?
-our friends?
-our neighbors?
-people we pass in the streets?
-people we met on facebook or whose blog we read?
-people we have never met?
Tuesday, October 7, 2008
Excursion Day
Tomorrow is Excursion Day to the Princes' Islands. Make sure you bring the handouts I distributed in class!
Remember: You guys are reporters for the day and you need to find someone to interview in order to create a story for your newspaper article we will complete later in class.
Your Exam: Remember your exam will also be in relation to newspaper writing using the content of the play, so be sure you are thinking about and reading newspaper articles and how they are written, so you get used to the writing style for the exam.
See you all tomorrow!!
Remember: You guys are reporters for the day and you need to find someone to interview in order to create a story for your newspaper article we will complete later in class.
Your Exam: Remember your exam will also be in relation to newspaper writing using the content of the play, so be sure you are thinking about and reading newspaper articles and how they are written, so you get used to the writing style for the exam.
See you all tomorrow!!
Thursday, September 25, 2008
Personal Blogs
Today, everyone in the class should have their blog started. This does not mean it should be anywhere near complete, but you should start posting and creating content for it.
You can work on the color sheme and layout whenever you choose, but the writing is the most important asepct. In time, you can developh it (explore it on your own) and imbed video and pictures and create a whole storybook of the things you love.
I hope you guys will really like it. I need ALL of you (everyone in both classes) to comment to this post with your URL for the blog. This is not the title of the blog, but the web address for the blog. I want to make sure every student's blog is listed on the left hand side. I am also going to remove the blogs of interest over the Bayram, so if you still want to follow one, make sure you copy the link into your "followers" section of your blogger.com home page (or Dashboard).
Hopefully all of this blogging vocabulary will make sense to you, but if it does not, please ask me questions, and I will respond in the comments of this post.
Reminder: Excursion Day will be October 8th! We will be going to the Princes' Islands. Make sure you bring your handout with you that I distributed in class.
You can work on the color sheme and layout whenever you choose, but the writing is the most important asepct. In time, you can developh it (explore it on your own) and imbed video and pictures and create a whole storybook of the things you love.
I hope you guys will really like it. I need ALL of you (everyone in both classes) to comment to this post with your URL for the blog. This is not the title of the blog, but the web address for the blog. I want to make sure every student's blog is listed on the left hand side. I am also going to remove the blogs of interest over the Bayram, so if you still want to follow one, make sure you copy the link into your "followers" section of your blogger.com home page (or Dashboard).
Hopefully all of this blogging vocabulary will make sense to you, but if it does not, please ask me questions, and I will respond in the comments of this post.
Reminder: Excursion Day will be October 8th! We will be going to the Princes' Islands. Make sure you bring your handout with you that I distributed in class.
Wednesday, September 24, 2008
What's Up Wednesday
Media
How is a play different than watching television or a movie? Why do people view going to see a play as something more intellectual than turning on the television?
How is a play different than watching television or a movie? Why do people view going to see a play as something more intellectual than turning on the television?
Tuesday, September 23, 2008
Wed and Thurs Lesson
Each class will be in the computer lab on Wed and Thurs - starting up your blogs. I want to give you the assignment ahead of time, so you can read it and at least familiarize yourself with what I am asking you to do.
Here is the assignment you will get in class on Wednesday (9H - Computer Lab 3) and Thursday (9G - Computer Lab 1):
Mrs. Clark
English 9
Personal Blog
Today you will create your personal blog and begin “building content” (which means, creating posts).
Step by Step:
1. Go to blogger.com
2. Click on the large, orange arrow that says “Create Your Own Blog”
3. Type in your email address (twice)
4. Type in a password (twice)
5. Choose a “Display Name” (this is the name that will come up on your blog and should probably be the same one you use when you comment on the class blog so we can avoid confusion)
6. Type in the “word verification”
7. Check the “Acceptance of terms” box
8. Click on the large, orange arrow that says “Continue”
Next Screen:
1. Choose a title of your blog – this will be displayed on your blog and on your dashboard (the place where you manage your blogs)
2. Choose a blog address (or URL) and check to see if it is available. If it is not available, change it to find one that will work for you that is available (it may not be your first choice, but you have to find something that will do).
3. Click on the large, orange arrow that says “Continue”
Next Screen:
1. Scroll through the designs offered and choose one that reflects the content of your blog or the mood you want your blog to have. You can always change it later if you want, but I want you to choose something for now.
Next Screen:
1. Click on the large, orange arrow that says “Start Blogging”
There are 3 tabs on the next screen that you can click on and play around with. Postings/Settings/Layout. Each one will let you manipulate your blog in different ways. The two tabs I want you to focus on are the posting tab and the layout tab.
1. I want you to create at least one post today (you can create more, but I want to see at least one by the end of the period). When you create a post, title it, write it, and then click on the large orange, “Publish Post” button. Then you can view the blog and see what your post looks like. Be sure to use the spell check and proofread your post before publishing. If you notice something is not the way you wanted it, you can always go back and edit it more.
2. Using the layout tab, I want you to add some things of your choice to the side bar using the layout options. You can go and add a gadget or somehow manipulate the way comments will be received or anything that you choose, but I want to see you personalize you blog in some way.
3. Using the layout tab again, I want you to change the color scheme of your blog to make it more personalized using the “fonts and colors” link. I would also like if you went and edited the header to look the way you want it to be.
NOTE: Every time you make a change be sure to preview what you have done. This way you can go back and edit it or leave it the way you have made it if you like it.
ENJOY!!
Here is the assignment you will get in class on Wednesday (9H - Computer Lab 3) and Thursday (9G - Computer Lab 1):
Mrs. Clark
English 9
Personal Blog
Today you will create your personal blog and begin “building content” (which means, creating posts).
Step by Step:
1. Go to blogger.com
2. Click on the large, orange arrow that says “Create Your Own Blog”
3. Type in your email address (twice)
4. Type in a password (twice)
5. Choose a “Display Name” (this is the name that will come up on your blog and should probably be the same one you use when you comment on the class blog so we can avoid confusion)
6. Type in the “word verification”
7. Check the “Acceptance of terms” box
8. Click on the large, orange arrow that says “Continue”
Next Screen:
1. Choose a title of your blog – this will be displayed on your blog and on your dashboard (the place where you manage your blogs)
2. Choose a blog address (or URL) and check to see if it is available. If it is not available, change it to find one that will work for you that is available (it may not be your first choice, but you have to find something that will do).
3. Click on the large, orange arrow that says “Continue”
Next Screen:
1. Scroll through the designs offered and choose one that reflects the content of your blog or the mood you want your blog to have. You can always change it later if you want, but I want you to choose something for now.
Next Screen:
1. Click on the large, orange arrow that says “Start Blogging”
There are 3 tabs on the next screen that you can click on and play around with. Postings/Settings/Layout. Each one will let you manipulate your blog in different ways. The two tabs I want you to focus on are the posting tab and the layout tab.
1. I want you to create at least one post today (you can create more, but I want to see at least one by the end of the period). When you create a post, title it, write it, and then click on the large orange, “Publish Post” button. Then you can view the blog and see what your post looks like. Be sure to use the spell check and proofread your post before publishing. If you notice something is not the way you wanted it, you can always go back and edit it more.
2. Using the layout tab, I want you to add some things of your choice to the side bar using the layout options. You can go and add a gadget or somehow manipulate the way comments will be received or anything that you choose, but I want to see you personalize you blog in some way.
3. Using the layout tab again, I want you to change the color scheme of your blog to make it more personalized using the “fonts and colors” link. I would also like if you went and edited the header to look the way you want it to be.
NOTE: Every time you make a change be sure to preview what you have done. This way you can go back and edit it or leave it the way you have made it if you like it.
ENJOY!!
Monday, September 22, 2008
News Articles - 1900s
Below is a newspaper article from the early 1900s (around the time period of the play). If you want to read more you can go to this site.
note: The reason I am posting about newspaper articles and asking you to read them is because your written exam will be writing a news article surrounding the plot of the play. You need to be familiar with how newspaper articles are written in English speaking papers and you will be asked to mimic this style of writing during your exam.
New and sensational stories of terrorism, murder and violence in Harlan County, Ky., were told by witnesses before the Senate Civil Liberties Committee last week.
The killing of their 19 year-old son was described by Marshal A. Musick, a Baptist preacher and union organizer, and his wife. After the father had received repeated warning that his life was in danger, a broadside of bullets was fired into the living room of the Musick home on February 9, killing 19-year-old Bennett Musick and wounding the mother and two other children.
Holding up his crippled bullet-mutilated hands for all to see, Hugh Taylor, a former Harlan Deputy, testified that Sheriff Theodore R. Middleton had offered him “2,000 and a new automobile”, if he would forget about the bullets fired at him by other deputies when he protested the Musick killing, and hide out until the Senate investigation was over.
A Harlan deputy, “Bill” Johnson, described himself as a “gun thug” and told how he was always “goin” out and catchin’ union organizers, taken’ them for a ride and bumpin’ ‘em off.” “But” he hastened to add, “I never killed anybody-not in Harlan County anyway.”
Sheriff Middleton, who admitted, that he and his wife had acquired property valued at $102,728 in the last three years, blandly informed the committee Friday that “quite a lot of violence has been committed by my deputies.” Admitting that he knew two deputies had shot a fellow officer and left him for dead on a mountain roadside, he said: “As a rule we don’t dismiss them until they are convicted.”
note: The reason I am posting about newspaper articles and asking you to read them is because your written exam will be writing a news article surrounding the plot of the play. You need to be familiar with how newspaper articles are written in English speaking papers and you will be asked to mimic this style of writing during your exam.
Harlan County Murder and Mutilation
May 2, 1937
May 2, 1937
New and sensational stories of terrorism, murder and violence in Harlan County, Ky., were told by witnesses before the Senate Civil Liberties Committee last week.
The killing of their 19 year-old son was described by Marshal A. Musick, a Baptist preacher and union organizer, and his wife. After the father had received repeated warning that his life was in danger, a broadside of bullets was fired into the living room of the Musick home on February 9, killing 19-year-old Bennett Musick and wounding the mother and two other children.
Holding up his crippled bullet-mutilated hands for all to see, Hugh Taylor, a former Harlan Deputy, testified that Sheriff Theodore R. Middleton had offered him “2,000 and a new automobile”, if he would forget about the bullets fired at him by other deputies when he protested the Musick killing, and hide out until the Senate investigation was over.
A Harlan deputy, “Bill” Johnson, described himself as a “gun thug” and told how he was always “goin” out and catchin’ union organizers, taken’ them for a ride and bumpin’ ‘em off.” “But” he hastened to add, “I never killed anybody-not in Harlan County anyway.”
Sheriff Middleton, who admitted, that he and his wife had acquired property valued at $102,728 in the last three years, blandly informed the committee Friday that “quite a lot of violence has been committed by my deputies.” Admitting that he knew two deputies had shot a fellow officer and left him for dead on a mountain roadside, he said: “As a rule we don’t dismiss them until they are convicted.”
Sunday, September 21, 2008
Good Newspaper Outlets
Here are some good web sites with newspaper articles in English:
- cnn.com
- nytimes.com
- latimes.com
- thnt.com
- theguardian.co.uk
- independent.co.uk
Saturday, September 20, 2008
Blog Check
Some other things to think about when following the blog you chose to follow:
- does the blog have many grammatical or spelling errors? how does that affect the reading?
- what are the "categories" or "tags" for each of the posts? are they humorous or informational?
- did you come across any "how-to" articles?
- are there any interviews?
- does the blogger poll his/her readers ever? what kinds of comments do people make?
Friday, September 19, 2008
Student Focus
Presenting Elif Güleç! Elif will be our first featured student this Friday and what a feature she is. I found out tons of information about her when I sat down with her to talk yesterday, but I won't tell all -- you will have to ask her for the details!
Elif was absent soon after the school year started, and I wasn't sure why that was, but students told me she was horseback riding. When i think of horsebakc riding, I think of dirt paths through forests and peaceful trips along the waters edge. Apparently I've got it all wrong!
Elif is a competitor! She rides horses better than the cowboys in the wild west. Here is what it is like to be Elif Güleç:
Place of Birth: Istanbul, Turkey
Age: 15 yrs old
Where have you attended school: I went to Enka and then I went to a French school and then I came to Koç. I really loved Enka, and I heard Koc was like Enka, so I knew I would be happy here.
Do you have any siblings?: I have one sister. She is 9 yrs old and her name is Aslı.
At 8pm at night you are: I am eating with friends or family.
Worst habit: Uhhhh...I forget things. Like sometimes I will even forget about my sister.
Embarrassing moment: One time I won fifth in the European Championships and I slipped and fell. It was really muddy and wet.
Favorite movie: I have lots of favorite movies. One ıs The Notebook.
Favorite Holiday: I went to watch the European Championship with some friends. My mom came too, but I didn't see her until like 8 o'clock at night.
World’s worst problem: Education. Well, I think that is Turkey's. I am not sure about the world.
Who is your hero?: My father. He always knows what to do.
One word that describes you: "ENOUGH"
Elif was absent soon after the school year started, and I wasn't sure why that was, but students told me she was horseback riding. When i think of horsebakc riding, I think of dirt paths through forests and peaceful trips along the waters edge. Apparently I've got it all wrong!
Elif is a competitor! She rides horses better than the cowboys in the wild west. Here is what it is like to be Elif Güleç:
Place of Birth: Istanbul, Turkey
Age: 15 yrs old
Where have you attended school: I went to Enka and then I went to a French school and then I came to Koç. I really loved Enka, and I heard Koc was like Enka, so I knew I would be happy here.
Do you have any siblings?: I have one sister. She is 9 yrs old and her name is Aslı.
At 8pm at night you are: I am eating with friends or family.
Worst habit: Uhhhh...I forget things. Like sometimes I will even forget about my sister.
Embarrassing moment: One time I won fifth in the European Championships and I slipped and fell. It was really muddy and wet.
Favorite movie: I have lots of favorite movies. One ıs The Notebook.
Favorite Holiday: I went to watch the European Championship with some friends. My mom came too, but I didn't see her until like 8 o'clock at night.
World’s worst problem: Education. Well, I think that is Turkey's. I am not sure about the world.
Who is your hero?: My father. He always knows what to do.
One word that describes you: "ENOUGH"
Thursday, September 18, 2008
Blog Check
I want you to pay attention to the following things on the blog your are reading:
- how often does the writer post?
- what are the topics of their posts?
- do they use pictures? when?
- what is the tone of their writing?
- what was your favorite post about?
PS - Keep an eye out for tomorrow's Feature Student! I wonder who it will be?! You'll have to check and see.
Wednesday, September 17, 2008
What's Up Wednesday
Free Time
What have you been doing in your free time? has it been influential to someone or changed your perspective in any way? Do you just watch television or play video games? How does what you do with your free time make you feel and why do you do it?
What have you been doing in your free time? has it been influential to someone or changed your perspective in any way? Do you just watch television or play video games? How does what you do with your free time make you feel and why do you do it?
Tuesday, September 16, 2008
Blog Check
For the next week, I want you to choose a blog on the left hand side that fits with something you enjoy and "follow it" for the next week. Following a blog means you will read it and make comments on it for the next week and get a sense of what the person writes about.
I want you to start thinking about what kind of blog you would like to have and how it can represent you! So, while you read, think about what you like and what you don't like about the blog.
HW reminder:
9H - complete the Responsibility survey and also start reading a blog of your choice for the next week
9G - start reading a blog and track it every day for the next week
Great job today in class! I loved our discussions about culture and learning about all of the ways that cultures are sometimes manipulated (positively and negatively). Many of you had really good ideas and really understood a lot of what we were talking about! Great job!
I want you to start thinking about what kind of blog you would like to have and how it can represent you! So, while you read, think about what you like and what you don't like about the blog.
HW reminder:
9H - complete the Responsibility survey and also start reading a blog of your choice for the next week
9G - start reading a blog and track it every day for the next week
Great job today in class! I loved our discussions about culture and learning about all of the ways that cultures are sometimes manipulated (positively and negatively). Many of you had really good ideas and really understood a lot of what we were talking about! Great job!
Monday, September 15, 2008
Reading
What is reading like? can you hear the voices of the people in your books? I hope so.
If you are a person who likes numbers, I would do a little test or game...get a timer (one that you don't have to look at) and set it for 60 seconds (one minute) start the timer and then read for the full 60 seconds, noting where you have started and stopped. Then, go back and count the words you read and write the number down.
Do this same activity (with different sections of text) at least 3 times. Then, add up the numbers and divide by 3 and you will get the average of how many words per minute you can read.
Keep in mind - reading a lot of words does not necessarily make you a "good" reader, but the more you read, the faster the words fly by. So - di this test now and then we will do it again at the end of the year and see how far your numbers have jumped!
Have fun reading!!
If you are a person who likes numbers, I would do a little test or game...get a timer (one that you don't have to look at) and set it for 60 seconds (one minute) start the timer and then read for the full 60 seconds, noting where you have started and stopped. Then, go back and count the words you read and write the number down.
Do this same activity (with different sections of text) at least 3 times. Then, add up the numbers and divide by 3 and you will get the average of how many words per minute you can read.
Keep in mind - reading a lot of words does not necessarily make you a "good" reader, but the more you read, the faster the words fly by. So - di this test now and then we will do it again at the end of the year and see how far your numbers have jumped!
Have fun reading!!
Sunday, September 14, 2008
Parent/Teacher Meeting
I met your parents today for a few minutes. I have to say, we meet for such a short period of time, it is difficult to really get a sense of what their hopes are for all of you. I am hoping that your next teacher (the one you will have while I am out on maternity leave) will have more informational meetings with them during Parent/Teacher Conferences. It is important to keep an open line of communication between teachers, students, and parents.
I hope your parents enjoyed meeting all of your teachers and had some nice tea and coffee and treats while they visited the school! See all of you tomorrow!
I hope your parents enjoyed meeting all of your teachers and had some nice tea and coffee and treats while they visited the school! See all of you tomorrow!
Friday, September 12, 2008
Language
What is port?
RULES OF COMMENTING:
- when answering the question do not repeat someone else's information.
- only comment if you can provide new or different information.
- if you are adding to someone else's comment, make sure you refer to what they have said or something that they have said.
- you can read other information in order to create your post (and I apreciate those of you who cited their sources), but try to ONLY comment when you know the answer - if you don't know the answer, check the comments to see if someone else does
RULES OF COMMENTING:
- when answering the question do not repeat someone else's information.
- only comment if you can provide new or different information.
- if you are adding to someone else's comment, make sure you refer to what they have said or something that they have said.
- you can read other information in order to create your post (and I apreciate those of you who cited their sources), but try to ONLY comment when you know the answer - if you don't know the answer, check the comments to see if someone else does
Thursday, September 11, 2008
Student Focus
Every Friday, starting with next Friday, I will post an interview I had with a student from either 9G or 9H (the two 9th grade classes that will be reading this blog). There are plenty of weeks for all of you to be interviewed, so don't feel bad if I don't get to interview you until the end of the year.
I just wanted to warn everyone ahead of time that I will be pulling aside a student here and there during lunch to interview them for the blog. I can't wait to learn more about you and to let you guys learn more about each other!
I just wanted to warn everyone ahead of time that I will be pulling aside a student here and there during lunch to interview them for the blog. I can't wait to learn more about you and to let you guys learn more about each other!
Wednesday, September 10, 2008
What's Up Wednesday
What do you do after you eat dinner on a regular day?
Reminder: bring ideas in your head to class for letter writing...what can you write to an American student about? What would you want a letter to you to say? What questions would you want someone to ask you?
Reminder: bring ideas in your head to class for letter writing...what can you write to an American student about? What would you want a letter to you to say? What questions would you want someone to ask you?
Tuesday, September 9, 2008
Welcome to School!
Does this seem welcoming? I know you are all ready for the school year and so excited that the summer is over. I am hoping you have all the books you need and get together the proper notebooks and pens and pencils. We have at least 179 more days of school after the first day!! It will be great!
- bring Masterclass (Unit 5) and An Inspector Calls to EVERY class!
- bring a notebook (something to write on) and a pen/pencil (something to write with) to every class and BE ORGANIZED
How do you feel after the first day? I feel excited and tired at the same time.
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