What sorts of things are you revising?
Did you think about any of these?:
-sentence variety (length)
-reported speech phrases (attributions)
-specific/active verbs
-about 20-40 words per sentence
-at least 10 (5 direct + 5 indirect) quotes
-making sure the most important information comes first and least important information comes last
Make sure you are reading English web sites about newspaper writing and informing yourself about different techniques you can use to refine, revise, and rework your article.
Happy Editing!
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